A Letter To Your God

A letter to your god,
time to see what brought me blindness,
can i continue?

tricks of my life,
my trip brought u a new world,
my words are my addiction .

its not over yet,
don't fret,
smoke rises from my eyes,
sinless hate.

a letter to your god,
to deaf to hear,
i can bring u these fears,
i can taste your tears.

a letter to your god,
signed truth and love,
brings still stirred interpretations.

enlighten me and bring me close,
closer to your unreal faith.


answer me questions of anger and confusion,
that sit in the air, an unheard prayer.

bring me life to cut down and destroy,
my letter to your god has a title too,
its name is so fair...so true.

with not much left to ask or to say,
happiness melts and floats away.

this letter to god promises disappointment,
we all know this, just some avoid it,
self induced ignorance is what its called,
a letter to your god and its above u all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 11/25/2009 9:11:00 PM
Wow...interesting poem...The Southern Belle
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Date: 11/25/2009 6:46:00 PM
x I don't know what to say, good luck
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