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A Letter To My Lover

I know that God is the master and all knowing and with this gift of life, he gave me you without showing me how to handle all the love and feelings thats included i spend my days trying to show my love; and work on how to prove it its been a challenge keeping you to myself cause other women see what their missing and you don't have the strength just yet to be flattered from a distance your charm and grace has been misplaced, it should be mine and mine alone and marriage is a scary place when the trust is completely gone the choice is mine for the first time i feel that love is not enough i need more from you cause time has proven temptation can call your bluff so ask yourself if this is what you want and please make a commitment today's the day just ask yourself if you have any resentment for the woman you say you love and choose not to be without time will not wait you must escape if you have any doubt

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/23/2011 8:31:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry I have enjoyed reading it today Danielle. Wishing you a wonderful weekend and hoping you find lots of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/22/2011 8:55:00 AM
Powerful deep write from the heart.... well written and expressed.... and thank you so much for your kind words ..its nice to write and have people connect or relate to it... thanks hun....always Michael
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Date: 7/21/2011 10:49:00 PM
Wow Danielle you sure poured a lot of emotion into this amazing heart-felt write! Truly touching!
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