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A Letter To My Lover

I know that God is the master and all knowing 
and with this gift of life, 
he gave me you without showing
me how to handle all the love 
and feelings thats included
i spend my days trying to show my love;
and work on how to prove it
its been a challenge keeping you to myself
cause other women see what their missing
and you don't have the strength just yet 
to be flattered from a distance
your charm and grace has been misplaced, 
it should be mine and mine alone
and marriage is a scary place 
when the trust is completely gone
the choice is mine for the first time 
i feel that love is not enough
i need more from you cause time has proven
temptation can call your bluff
so ask yourself if this is what you want 
and please make a commitment
today's the day just ask yourself 
if you have any resentment 
for the woman you say you love 
and choose not to be without 
time will not wait you must escape 
if you have any doubt

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/23/2011 8:31:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry I have enjoyed reading it today Danielle. Wishing you a wonderful weekend and hoping you find lots of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/22/2011 8:55:00 AM
Powerful deep write from the heart.... well written and expressed.... and thank you so much for your kind words ..its nice to write and have people connect or relate to it... thanks hun....always Michael
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Date: 7/21/2011 10:49:00 PM
Wow Danielle you sure poured a lot of emotion into this amazing heart-felt write! Truly touching!
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