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A Letter To My Father

You broke my heart You shattered my dreams You've missed almost everything Now your back and I can't think I fear my thoughts that you might leave Gone again can't be found Years gone by and not a sound Now your here, I hope to stay I love you dad in every way Please promise me your here to stay And Will not loose another day

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Belinda Parish

Date: 2/7/2009 9:44:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful write.

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 8/29/2008 6:27:00 AM

Your Dad is a good man who knows he's made some bad choices as we all have in our lives. He's an inspiration for the underdog. God Bless both of you. A daughter's love is one of life's greatest blessings. Vince

Deneen White

Date: 8/24/2008 8:20:00 PM

hi it is always heart-wrenching to read these kind or writes, yet it's necessary and a catharsis, my father is still alive yet you would never know it because he never was around, hopefully you and your father can mend your fences and he can be the father that you desire, great write, take care D-nyce

James Foulk

Date: 8/23/2008 5:27:00 PM

this was a heart felt piece of poetry and praying that everything works out ok, this was a great poem.

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/23/2008 7:23:00 AM

Hi Honey - As hard as these words are for me to read I'm glad that you are constructively expressing your feelings. As I stated in one of my books it was your love that helped me become the father I am for Michaela. I love you with all my heart honey and if I could do it over I would. Love you and great job expressing your feelings, left me in tears - God Bless hon, Dad

Katherine Stella

Date: 8/23/2008 5:39:00 AM

oh I'm sure your dad will stay in touch one has to grow and love thy self before he can love another and knowing your dad he wants to make it right now just knowing he is back should make that light shine alittle brighter and think you are still number 1 and has a little sister now you can share with children can bring together with just their smiles keep on sharing and beleiving it will happen once again

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/23/2008 4:59:00 AM

Another emotional outpouring of love. Father and daughter have such a special bond. Beautiful write. Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/22/2008 5:45:00 PM

I pray that this reunion will bring both of you such a tight connection, that there never, ever be doubts again. Blessings to you both. A tender poem, Sarah.......Your friend in poetry...Carrie