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A Letter To My Dear

The village is changing White teeth below black beard -Coming into light slowly No waste of money Safe journey What a peaceful environment! -The election has come, dear! All are brothers and sisters for them I and my son both are brothers to him At least for now Give hope for complete safety Reduced food price Free transport systems They have changed stance -The election has come! No thief Silent streets Comfortable decibel for ears War forget to fight It becomes public that you will come Rumour says you will win The large crowd loves you The election often demands blood I know you will surely embrace us Stop this blood game forever Change the election into a festival

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Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 12/18/2014 7:38:00 PM

Very interesting dear poet Litan.Thanks for sharing.Love and Rrgards. -Safa

Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/5/2013 5:29:00 PM

This is an interesting and unique poem, Litan. I have not read many poems that were written in the form of a letter. Great work!...Thank you for the kind comments.

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 11/4/2013 9:06:00 PM

Quite an appealing work Latin with the sweet sarcastic touch on the current ongoing election wave. It is always nice to see a friend from India on Poetry Soup and thanks for your comments on my Independence Day poem. Ravindra K Kapoor

Litan Dey
Date: 11/5/2013 11:25:00 AM

Yea!you are right...I'm also happy to see you here and just visit your profile for a short time.Thanks...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/4/2013 11:32:00 AM

Litan, thank you for the smile. .About your post. ..love the intense letter. a journey in which change your appealing thoughts... love the power and hard hitting expressions. always a true fan... Litan. have yourself a sweet day smiling away. ..hugs..Linda

Litan Dey
Date: 11/4/2013 12:03:00 PM

I appreciate your smile and visit to my poem...always smile!!

Len Gasun

Date: 11/2/2013 9:53:00 PM

This is a perfect and awesome poem my dear friend Litan. I'm reminded the same scenario during election day in our place. You keep me smiling while reading this my dear friend. Thank you so much for sharing. So love it and enjoyed. Thank you so much as well for your nice comments on my poem. Have a great weekend! love lots and hugs, Leonora

Litan Dey
Date: 11/3/2013 11:06:00 AM

Thanks friend....Before election they come to our home and promised so many words.Ha ha after that we have to wait whole day and day after day for our any problem which need his help.

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/2/2013 3:44:00 PM

election day is coming here soon, sometimes change is good, sometimes it's not...hope it works out well....nice write! have a great weekend...hugs :)

Litan Dey
Date: 11/3/2013 11:02:00 AM

We need only work,good work...everybody can notice the difference at and before election time.Thanks for your visit dear..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2013 6:13:00 PM

I am not acquainted with this topic so the poem was a bit hard for me to understand. Do you not go along with the popular choice in the election?

Litan Dey
Date: 11/2/2013 12:35:00 PM

I go and i have to go with my favourite.Here also i write in favour of my favourite.Thanks for your sweet visit