A Letter To My Dear

The village is changing
White teeth below black beard
-Coming into light slowly
No waste of money
Safe journey
What a peaceful environment!
-The election has come, dear!

All are brothers and sisters for them
I and my son both are brothers to him
At least for now
Give hope for complete safety
Reduced food price
Free transport systems
They have changed stance
-The election has come!

No thief
Silent streets
Comfortable decibel for ears
War forget to fight
It becomes public that you will come
Rumour says you will win
The large crowd loves you
The election often demands blood
I know you will surely embrace us
Stop this blood game forever
Change the election into a festival
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Thajudeen Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 7:38 PM
Very interesting dear poet Litan.Thanks for sharing.Love and Rrgards. -Safa
Deschler Avatar
November 5, 2013 at 5:29 PM
This is an interesting and unique poem, Litan. I have not read many poems that were written in the form of a letter. Great work!...Thank you for the kind comments.
Kapoor Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 9:06 PM
Quite an appealing work Latin with the sweet sarcastic touch on the current ongoing election wave. It is always nice to see a friend from India on Poetry Soup and thanks for your comments on my Independence Day poem. Ravindra K Kapoor
Dey Avatar
November 5, 2013 at 11:25 AM
Yea!you are right...I'm also happy to see you here and just visit your profile for a short time.Thanks...
A   Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 11:32 AM
Litan, thank you for the smile. .About your post. ..love the intense letter. a journey in which change your appealing thoughts... love the power and hard hitting expressions. always a true fan... Litan. have yourself a sweet day smiling away. ..hugs..Linda
Dey Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 12:03 PM
I appreciate your smile and visit to my poem...always smile!!
Gasun Avatar
November 2, 2013 at 9:53 PM
This is a perfect and awesome poem my dear friend Litan. I'm reminded the same scenario during election day in our place. You keep me smiling while reading this my dear friend. Thank you so much for sharing. So love it and enjoyed. Thank you so much as well for your nice comments on my poem. Have a great weekend! love lots and hugs, Leonora
Dey Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 11:06 AM
Thanks friend....Before election they come to our home and promised so many words.Ha ha after that we have to wait whole day and day after day for our any problem which need his help.
Adams Avatar
November 2, 2013 at 3:44 PM
election day is coming here soon, sometimes change is good, sometimes it's not...hope it works out well....nice write! have a great weekend...hugs :)
Dey Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 11:02 AM
We need only work,good work...everybody can notice the difference at and before election time.Thanks for your visit dear..
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 6:13 PM
I am not acquainted with this topic so the poem was a bit hard for me to understand. Do you not go along with the popular choice in the election?
Dey Avatar
November 2, 2013 at 12:35 PM
I go and i have to go with my favourite.Here also i write in favour of my favourite.Thanks for your sweet visit
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