A Leaping Acquaintance

A LEAPING ACQUAINTANCE

O ask me if a friend is mine for keeping
And I will scroll down her countenance in years
To show acquaintance that’s a target leaping

And I will tell you of the long nights’ weeping
Into the valley of the corrupted seers
That her acquaintance was a target, leaping

As if acts of confidence were seeping
Down the drainpipe like a burst of tears,
Asking if a friend is for safe keeping,

Secrets unravelled in the glare, bleeping
With the traffic of the times that hooked my peers
Just ask me if her friendship’s mine for keeping:

I say, a  pox on their assiduous reaping
Their facts are gleaned where the bar sells beers
To show acquaintances like a target, leaping

On opportunity, grafting  on chances, peeping
With trashy envious shades adrift in leers;
O ask me if  this friend is worth the keeping,
I’ll show an acquaintance missed the target, leaping.
 from IN MEMORY OF HER 2008)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/9/2023 2:56:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/8/2015 4:37:00 PM
a powerful and passionate write! my heart was aching at end.
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Rosemarie Rowley
Date: 1/9/2015 4:15:00 AM
Thank you!
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