A Landscape Covered In White

If hadn't been for the chill
which made me peak outside,
I could have missed out on the thrill
of seeing a landscape covered in white.


Far beyond the virgin, silent forest
of firs, oaks, spruces and maples...
grotesque pine trees stand at the entrance 
as snowflakes weave a soft blanket.


Unhappy bluebirds find no melodies...
as they did in the previous seasons;
even flying is very risky, if not boring, as they land on icy logs,    
and instead of doing many miles, they limit themselves to yards.


At high noon, sunlight doesn't bring relief to trees that easily break
as their very heavy branches drip from the thick snow which freezes
like teardrops, instantly turning them into sharp, glistening icicles...
ah, winter's surliness may seem unpleasant staring at an icy lake!


It's warm and cozy being protected by four walls of sturdy bricks,
sipping hot chocolate and watching those, thick shards of ice 
suddenly crumple, making the soaked squirrels scram in surprise...
o sweet serendipity, should I go to bed and miss out on winter's tricks?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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M V Avatar
November 30, 2010 at 10:14 AM
I like the style of this verse more than theme,Andrew
Brown Avatar
November 30, 2010 at 8:21 AM
Beautiful picture you have painted with your words Andrew. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
November 30, 2010 at 6:40 AM
Wonderful images you have penned to make your thoughts quite explicit, Andrew
Onclaud Avatar
November 30, 2010 at 3:09 AM
inticately woven with beautiful visual language.. if this is for a contest, my best wishes to you, andrew. warmest, nette
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