A Lambs Memory

i still think of you everyday
but somehow you are slipping away
the things that were your shadows and reflections
are soon becoming fading recollections
i still have times when i play sad songs
still kiss your picture when i get home
and i still have moments when i can't help myself
i cry out in agony with deepest regret
but lately i've been wondering why
why must i for this woman cry
then i think about the moment we met
how beautiful you were i'll never forget
i'll always have our tender moments
the ones you gave me and the ones i gave you
but this world is temporal and so were you
and like Job said "naked i came into this world
and naked i'll leave"
like light from yesterday separated by night
the past like a bird has taken flight
and sadly now we must say our goodbyes
long farewells with tender cries
my obsession with you will come to a cease
my loving soul from yours released
but whenever i'm lonely i'll think of you
you'll always be my comfort when i need you
so for now we'll begin our sad goodbye
till soon one day i'll no longer cry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Boyd Avatar
March 5, 2011 at 4:07 AM
I felt every word of that. Very well done.
Dorsey Avatar
December 16, 2010 at 12:13 PM
John please provide your a objective personal comment becuase it is be your personal take on it. Whatever it is, is taken with a grain of salt. Yet, the poem is about love, love of course has many avenues. Thank you again for taking the time to read and more over to express your feelings from it.
Dorsey Avatar
December 16, 2010 at 11:32 AM
Hi John..You posted a comment on a peom I just upload and I was wondering if you would elborate on your comment. Thank you and enjoyed reading.
Puddifoot Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 3:54 PM
Congratulations on your poetic win - maybe it is the right time for you to seek closure on the past...
Villarosa Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 8:58 PM
Congratulations John on winning this contest. Beautiful words to bring back the good times but all must come to an end with regrets, its just normal for us to feel this way but just put all of this as your hub of memories. (^_^) Noel.
Brown Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 2:09 PM
Congratulations on your win John iii in Audrey's contest. Wishing you the best with your writing and winning in contests. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 8:56 AM
Wow John, you sure expressed so much here and your words just moved me-- I do think that writing is just so cathartic and this poem of yours was just so beautiful and heartfelt-- super congrats on your very well deserved win! - nikko :)
Sweetheart Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 7:46 AM
Congrats John on your big win in the love letters contest with this excellent entry depicting luv.. enjoy this happy Sunday with luv...
Devonshire Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 7:02 AM
You deserve a round of applause for this win, John. How difficult it must have been to write about your feelings in such a beautiful, heartfelt poem. You are right; poems that come from the heart are our best efforts. So happy for your success, dear friend, and I hope you can feel my three-second embrace across the miles between us. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 6:25 AM
The contest is over and you're a winner..Sara
Falotico Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 6:05 AM
This was a winner from day one!!! Congrats my friend..
Peranteau Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 5:50 AM
These words are prescious dear poet....congratulations on your entries win ! Much love, james
Wellington Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 6:02 PM
John my friend, congrats on this your win with such a remarkable write to your own special April. One love, Joy (Jew)
Haick Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 3:27 PM
Dear John, Your heart has spoken and these words will remain forever with April. It's truly beautiful! I cried and yet rejoiced that she's now safe forever. Thank you for supporting my contest! Love, Audrey
Freeman Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 3:07 PM
Congratulations John on your success in Audrey's contest. Well deserved win. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 3:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, john
Ruebel Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 11:05 AM
John, Someone wonderful shared something with me just the other day. "Nothing happens in this life by accident" There is a reason, your brighter days will come again my friend. As Always, Shar
R Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 8:07 AM
Such a stirring poem, John. I'm sorry you're going through such a sad time. Just hang on the beautiful memories. Hugs, Emilia
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November 5, 2010 at 6:45 PM
Beautiful.
Keogh Jr. Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 6:19 PM
John, I hope that this is not real life, but if it is, you have my condolences. I know that God exists and that He and His Son are ood, so be at peace. I know that she will wait for you! I love the " mawkiskly mournful" remark! Pithy, John, Pithy. Regards and affection from Gerard.
Neels Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 10:22 AM
Cherished memories no one is able to take away. Goodbye is one thing we never get use to John. Embrace the memories
Mehta Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 7:14 AM
Thanks for your comments on my poem Diwali. Please share my blogs on Diwali festival,john
Sweetheart Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 7:04 AM
Remember the good times John.. those are most important.. glad u enjoyed my "Specialties" today luv ..happy weekend...
M V Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 6:40 AM
an exceptional piece,friend.fabiyas
Wellington Avatar
November 4, 2010 at 10:13 PM
Good byes are never easy to say, especially when it is with someone so dear. Time they say heal all wounds, but sometimes the healing process is a wound in itself. Continue to be blessed my friend. The storm is over now for her. Always, Joy (Jew) Soup mail.
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