A Knight

Shining armor clad 'pon a white horse Eternally strong knight my love, my guide Reign in, hold, steer my feeble course Encircle with loving arms, shelter, hide Now let it be known I'm your pride Delighted in you, you're love constant source Intriguing the very thought of you implied Passionate moments spent no remorse Incomparable joy, rapture when by your side Touched, tasted of tranquility yearningly tied Year: 2012 Sponsor: Francine Roberts Contest: Romance Me With English Quintain Written: November 5 and 6, 2012 The first letter of each line read downward spells another word plus the first letter of year.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/8/2012 11:53:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the "Romance" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/7/2012 8:33:00 AM

Congratulations Sara a super write xx

Tahera Mannan

Date: 11/7/2012 1:29:00 AM

Beautiful Write Sara. Warm congrats for the win.

Francine Roberts

Date: 11/6/2012 10:16:00 PM

this was just beautiful Sara, congrats on your 2nd place win

Kash Poet

Date: 11/6/2012 11:28:00 AM

Beautiful romantic poem here Sara.Enjoyed the read.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/6/2012 10:44:00 AM

An excellent write that I enjoyed reading today Sara. I hope to have more time in the future to read more. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/6/2012 10:18:00 AM

Wow, Sara, this poem is over and above your typical write, very nicely done my friend! I really enjoyed reading this vastly impressive poem this afternoon! What a delightfully romantic piece, Great Work!!