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A Kite Flies High

a kite flies high
carried by the wind - -
the string snaps

for Gwendolen's contest
I'm not sure if this is a good haiku, LOL, but Deb G has helped me enormously

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Debbie Guzzi Date: 4/19/2012 6:26:00 PM most excellent! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 4/16/2012 9:54:00 PM A wonderful journey with your Kite and congratulations on your winning place Jack xx Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 4/16/2012 3:39:00 PM I think its a good one Jack; and Gwendolen must think so by its place here,, best wishes.. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/16/2012 1:00:00 PM Congratulations on your win in Gwen's "Lets Go Fly A Kite" contest Jack. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Deborah Burch Date: 4/15/2012 9:48:00 PM Jack, congratulations on your win!! Wonderful piece!! Draws such emotion in so few words...great economy! big hugs,love deb Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 4/15/2012 6:23:00 PM Jack..you really wrote of a powerful "kite moment" in this winning haiku..Yours was the only haiku entered and it really caught my eye...The other judges enjoyed it as well..... Congrats, friend. Gwendolen Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 4/5/2012 1:09:00 PM Real good write here Jack; and i wish you well for the contest...) Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 4/2/2012 9:36:00 PM Very vivid images here, Jack! Really enjoyed this! And I read your comments, I will make sure to remind you next year- we can still go beyond Earth hour and do our own part like using less plastic bags, planting trees, etc :) I hope your hand is doing better-- I read your blog and I suppose the bandages are gone by now :) Will continue praying for your hand! :D Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 3/31/2012 8:22:00 AM I think it is great! Such a vivid picture to see; I can even feel the wind. All the best in the contest my friend! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/30/2012 9:45:00 AM so happy all went well Jack and such a short procedure.. take it easy now and glad u were uplifted by all the poets on the blog commenting well wishes luv.. rest and enjoy weekend luv.. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/29/2012 10:08:00 PM I LOVE this kind of haiku, Jack. hope it does well in the contest. Login to Reply

M.I.A . Date: 3/29/2012 9:09:00 PM well, it sure sounds wonderful for me. good luck on the contest and for all this time, i thank you dear poet Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 3/29/2012 8:48:00 PM Wow this IS a good Haiku Jack! I thoroughly enjoyed this write that I have read this evening! I really liked the juxtaposition, "the string snaps" which brings the poem to a definite close! Shows awesome talent my friend! Great Work!! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/29/2012 5:58:00 PM Bye, bye kite..Enjoyed reading your and Deb's creativeness...I have had that to happen with my children and it is a sad day..Thanks for stopping by...Sara Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/29/2012 3:19:00 PM this is fun and sad Jack.. it is a perfect Haiku full of vision and emotion.. good luck luv.. are u doing OK preparing for 30th..?? Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/29/2012 2:05:00 PM I LOVE this modern haiku, Jack! Those blasted strings always snapped when I tried flying a kite. Then you'd look at the trees above and see a kite cemetery. LOL Best wishes in Gwen's contest! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Broken Butterfly Date: 3/29/2012 1:53:00 PM I think it is a great Haiku Jack, I could see and feel that string snap, best of luck in the contest, Debbie has helped me alot also, so I know what you mean. Login to Reply