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A Kiss So True

That tender sweet kiss,when our lips first touched frozen in time forever never be repeated. That first touch of your lips was like Quinine still carrying bitterness wish you never touched me. =========================================== Placement:5th (Jan 2012) * A collab with David Williams for Tracie's 'Opposite' contest. We went for Love/Hate relationship Mine is the 2nd part.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/2/2012 6:58:00 AM

It is always a pleasure to read your poetry Kash. I want to thank you today for your kind words on my writing. Your words are appreciated more then you know. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2012 11:42:00 PM

now another soupmail for ya!! there must be three over there now.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/16/2012 2:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Opposites Attract" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2012 6:20:00 PM

Kash, I am so pleased to see your big win with David. WEll deserved and a GREAT topic to do with a kimo form. LUv, Andrea and CONGRATS

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 1/14/2012 5:05:00 PM

ha! love this :) congratulations on your win!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/13/2012 2:04:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Kash & David! This sure was a good contrast on a kiss, so cool of you two to write about it! :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/13/2012 12:18:00 PM

thrilled to the bones.. you both rammed it; beautiful, kashi and david! CONGRATS :) huggs!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/13/2012 10:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your joint win x

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/13/2012 9:14:00 AM

CONGRATS KASH ON A WONDERFUL WIN WITH DAVID.. GREAT COLLAB OF AWESOME WORDS ON A GLORIOUS THEME MY FRIEND.. ENJOY SUCCESS...

David Williams

Date: 1/13/2012 8:56:00 AM

Kash, congrats on our win. it really was an honour to work with a great poet as yourself, many thanks..David

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/10/2012 12:52:00 PM

Gosh I love this Kash, hope to see it on the winner's list ;) awesome collab between yourself and David!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2012 9:31:00 PM

kash, this is the new one I did not see? I saw this gem!

M.I.A .

Date: 1/5/2012 7:47:00 PM

wow, this is superb! you both keep the flow moving till it reach its peaks. good luck on the contest kash

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/5/2012 10:50:00 AM

Reads like a winner..First one very romantic..Second one like someone kissing someone with baggage from a previous relationship..Enjoyed the great strength of the opposites..Good luck in the contest..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2012 10:49:00 PM

new ones new ones!!

Jack Horne

Date: 1/4/2012 3:16:00 PM

You work so well together. Many congrats on your wins, my friend : )

Dinda Minardi

Date: 1/4/2012 9:22:00 AM

Well, you make a rigid sounds very poetic and dramatic. Awesomely written :0)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/4/2012 8:49:00 AM

a isuper delight Kash .. much good luck luv .. thankx for correction for PD's contest .. have missed u so .. and your special words .. appreciate thoughtful comments and concern my friend ..