Kash Poet Poet Kimo

A Kiss So True

That tender sweet kiss,when our lips first touched
frozen in time forever
never be repeated.


That first touch of your lips was like Quinine
still carrying bitterness
wish you never touched me.



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Placement:5th (Jan 2012)




* A collab with David Williams for Tracie's 
'Opposite' contest.
We went for Love/Hate relationship
Mine is the 2nd part.

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Carol Sunshine Brown March 2, 2012 at 6:58 AM It is always a pleasure to read your poetry Kash. I want to thank you today for your kind words on my writing. Your words are appreciated more then you know. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich February 21, 2012 at 11:42 PM now another soupmail for ya!! there must be three over there now.

Carol Sunshine Brown January 16, 2012 at 2:14 PM Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Opposites Attract" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich January 15, 2012 at 6:20 PM Kash, I am so pleased to see your big win with David. WEll deserved and a GREAT topic to do with a kimo form. LUv, Andrea and CONGRATS

Black Eyed Susan January 14, 2012 at 5:05 PM ha! love this :) congratulations on your win!

Kabuteng P.Ink K. January 13, 2012 at 2:04 PM Congrats on your win, Kash & David! This sure was a good contrast on a kiss, so cool of you two to write about it! :)

Nette Onclaud January 13, 2012 at 12:18 PM thrilled to the bones.. you both rammed it; beautiful, kashi and david! CONGRATS :) huggs!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 13, 2012 at 10:46 AM Congratulations on your joint win x

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 13, 2012 at 9:14 AM CONGRATS KASH ON A WONDERFUL WIN WITH DAVID.. GREAT COLLAB OF AWESOME WORDS ON A GLORIOUS THEME MY FRIEND.. ENJOY SUCCESS...

David Williams January 13, 2012 at 8:56 AM Kash, congrats on our win. it really was an honour to work with a great poet as yourself, many thanks..David

Wilma Neels January 10, 2012 at 12:52 PM Gosh I love this Kash, hope to see it on the winner's list ;) awesome collab between yourself and David!!

Andrea Dietrich January 5, 2012 at 9:31 PM kash, this is the new one I did not see? I saw this gem!

M.I.A . January 5, 2012 at 7:47 PM wow, this is superb! you both keep the flow moving till it reach its peaks. good luck on the contest kash

Sara Kendrick January 5, 2012 at 10:50 AM Reads like a winner..First one very romantic..Second one like someone kissing someone with baggage from a previous relationship..Enjoyed the great strength of the opposites..Good luck in the contest..Sara

Andrea Dietrich January 4, 2012 at 10:49 PM new ones new ones!!

Jack Horne January 4, 2012 at 3:16 PM You work so well together. Many congrats on your wins, my friend : )

Dinda Minardi January 4, 2012 at 9:22 AM Well, you make a rigid sounds very poetic and dramatic. Awesomely written :0)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 4, 2012 at 8:49 AM a isuper delight Kash .. much good luck luv .. thankx for correction for PD's contest .. have missed u so .. and your special words .. appreciate thoughtful comments and concern my friend ..

Anoucheka Gangabissoon January 3, 2012 at 10:36 PM Wonderful KAsh, a true illustration of love and hate....i enjoy your poetry see ya Anoucheka

Andrea Dietrich January 3, 2012 at 10:01 PM Kash, how is your new year treating you? I hope everything is flowing nicely in your life. Give us a new poem soon! Luv, Andrea

Harry Horsman January 3, 2012 at 7:53 AM Like this, both are excellent. harry

Nette Onclaud January 3, 2012 at 4:09 AM dang!.. great use of polaririty here, kash.. . winner!.:) soupied you ... come visit..:)huggs!

Poet Destroyer A January 2, 2012 at 10:11 AM A very good entry... Enjoyed Kash... Both sides... Take care..pd

Elizabeth Wesley January 2, 2012 at 9:40 AM A special verse Kash, the two of you did a great write with opposites. All the best in the contest and new year. :)

Andrea Dietrich January 2, 2012 at 8:03 AM What a GREAT way to do the opposites contest. Thanks for the idea. I'll have Susan do a short one like THIS. Way to go with this one, Kash. Luv, Andrea