Robert A. Dufresne Poet Rhyme

A Kiss Goodby?

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Cold metal trains pressing refrains on hard steel tracks,
Racing ever, changing never the lyrics of clickety clack.
Loved ones scurrying, hurrying, never worrying,
They may never be riding back,
In the cold metal trains pressing refrains on hard steel tracks,
Racing ever, changing never the lyrics of clickety clack.

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Andrea Dietrich January 9, 2010 at 5:54 PM A great line "pressing refrains. . ." Relating the train to lyrics. Love when you are clever! Thanks for all your comment today and again, for the tribute. Luv, andrea

Richard Pickett December 30, 2009 at 4:28 AM All aboard! You got the groove in on this one Bob. Where's the caboose? lol...Enjoyable read my friend. Great rhyme scheme. Well done and God Bless...Taz

Janice Herzog December 19, 2009 at 3:33 PM Dear Robert: Love the rhythm in this poem. Thanks for reading my poem. I'm so very glad that you liked it! Love, Janice Herzog xoxo

L'Nass Shango December 16, 2009 at 4:54 AM I love this ... good write

Jessica Schillo December 11, 2009 at 1:10 AM This was beautiful. =) You are a very good poet. Also, thank you for your comments. :)

Doris Culverhouse December 9, 2009 at 2:46 PM very good!! sad but so true!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 9, 2009 at 2:02 PM I like the use of your words here, Robert, so fluent and fluid.. enjoyed this rhyme.. blessings... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Mary Meade Stephenson December 8, 2009 at 7:20 PM Superb imagery you have conveyed here Robert ..thought provoking and so sad....thanks so much for sharing and for your kind comments~Mary

John Loving Iii December 8, 2009 at 4:44 PM nice rhyming. john

Sara Kendrick December 8, 2009 at 4:13 PM Seems kinda a sad write here in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Caroline Cécile Delacroix December 8, 2009 at 12:44 PM Got to get off that train! It leads to despair. A nice and fun short write. Thanks for sharing. Besgt wishes, Caroline.

Colleen Bono December 8, 2009 at 9:23 AM Nice one.Just wanted to say hi and hope all is well.