Mohamed Adel Poet Rhyme

A Kind of Love

She: he told me to wait for him today
Because he has something important……
For me to say
I think he’ll show me his feelings….
He’ll confess
The love he has for me, but has been….
Trying to suppress
Then we can go together for a walk…
A Launch or a kiss!
 
This promised day, I’ve been months longing for
Thank god it finally came! I’ve being 
Drugged With dreams to the core

And hesitation has been sending us
For months back and forth
But love is like everything else, has to….
Take its course

So now I shall hear and see
The love he’s been holding for me

He: hi, sorry for being late
And for keeping you too long wait
The thing is I’ve been thinking and figured
That It can’t be any longer put off
So I want to give you this letter……. 
Confessing the love

That I’ve been hesitated to reveal 
And have been trying to conceal
But I thought now was the right time….
To come and tell you that I’m rather
In love……………
With your brother!


She: ………………..!





7/19/2015

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Ra Shagun June 19, 2017 at 2:21 AM Oh my god ..it's ... wonderful... congrats Adel..for a lovely twist and this victory.. Mohamed Adel June 19, 2017 at 11:02 AM Thank you, Shagun, so much :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 2, 2015 at 10:57 PM Superb write Mohamed that's worthy of great win! Big congrats! Mohamed Adel August 3, 2015 at 5:40 AM Thank you,Dr.Upma, so much for your constant support :)

D.W. Rodgers August 2, 2015 at 8:27 PM Sibling rivalry a the next level, congrats on your win. Mohamed Adel August 3, 2015 at 5:39 AM yeah i think this poem won't be too fictional in a couple of years. thank you, Dave, so much for stopping by :)

James Inman August 2, 2015 at 6:52 PM Nice twist. Mohamed Adel August 3, 2015 at 5:36 AM Thank you, James :)

Jan Allison August 2, 2015 at 4:53 PM Dropping back with my congrats Mohamed:-) hugs jan xx Mohamed Adel August 3, 2015 at 5:36 AM Thank you,Jan, so much :)

Skat A August 2, 2015 at 4:10 PM :) SK Mohamed Adel August 3, 2015 at 5:35 AM :)

Aurore Severo July 28, 2015 at 4:04 PM I really like this poem. Mohamed Adel July 28, 2015 at 4:11 PM Glad you do :)

Poet Destroyer A July 27, 2015 at 10:10 PM nice win Mohamed Adel July 28, 2015 at 4:10 PM Thank you,Linda, so much :)

Skat A July 24, 2015 at 4:36 PM Mohamed, Congratulations on your awesome win. **SKAT** Mohamed Adel July 25, 2015 at 3:24 AM Thank you,Skat, so much for your constant support :)

Jan Allison July 24, 2015 at 1:37 PM oh this is sad Mohamed - the twist at the ending took my by surprise - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Mohamed Adel July 25, 2015 at 3:23 AM Thank you,Jan, so much for stopping by and glad you liked it :)

Shadow Hamilton July 24, 2015 at 12:30 PM interesting and different Mohamed congrats on placing hugs Mohamed Adel July 25, 2015 at 3:21 AM Thank you,Shadow, so much for placing me and glad you liked it :)