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A Kind of Love

She: he told me to wait for him today Because he has something important…… For me to say I think he’ll show me his feelings…. He’ll confess The love he has for me, but has been…. Trying to suppress Then we can go together for a walk… A Launch or a kiss! This promised day, I’ve been months longing for Thank god it finally came! I’ve being Drugged With dreams to the core And hesitation has been sending us For months back and forth But love is like everything else, has to…. Take its course So now I shall hear and see The love he’s been holding for me He: hi, sorry for being late And for keeping you too long wait The thing is I’ve been thinking and figured That It can’t be any longer put off So I want to give you this letter……. Confessing the love That I’ve been hesitated to reveal And have been trying to conceal But I thought now was the right time…. To come and tell you that I’m rather In love…………… With your brother! She: ………………..! 7/19/2015

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Date: 6/19/2017 2:21:00 AM
Oh my god ..it's ... wonderful... congrats Adel..for a lovely twist and this victory..
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 6/19/2017 11:02:00 AM
Thank you, Shagun, so much :)
Date: 8/2/2015 10:57:00 PM
Superb write Mohamed that's worthy of great win! Big congrats!
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 8/3/2015 5:40:00 AM
Thank you,Dr.Upma, so much for your constant support :)
Date: 8/2/2015 8:27:00 PM
Sibling rivalry a the next level, congrats on your win.
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 8/3/2015 5:39:00 AM
yeah i think this poem won't be too fictional in a couple of years. thank you, Dave, so much for stopping by :)
Date: 8/2/2015 6:52:00 PM
Nice twist.
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 8/3/2015 5:36:00 AM
Thank you, James :)
Date: 8/2/2015 4:53:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Mohamed:-) hugs jan xx
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 8/3/2015 5:36:00 AM
Thank you,Jan, so much :)
Date: 8/2/2015 4:10:00 PM
:) SK
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 8/3/2015 5:35:00 AM
:)
Date: 7/28/2015 4:04:00 PM
I really like this poem.
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 7/28/2015 4:11:00 PM
Glad you do :)
Date: 7/27/2015 10:10:00 PM
nice win
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 7/28/2015 4:10:00 PM
Thank you,Linda, so much :)
Date: 7/24/2015 4:36:00 PM
Mohamed, Congratulations on your awesome win. **SKAT**
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 7/25/2015 3:24:00 AM
Thank you,Skat, so much for your constant support :)
Date: 7/24/2015 1:37:00 PM
oh this is sad Mohamed - the twist at the ending took my by surprise - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 7/25/2015 3:23:00 AM
Thank you,Jan, so much for stopping by and glad you liked it :)
Date: 7/24/2015 12:30:00 PM
interesting and different Mohamed congrats on placing hugs
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 7/25/2015 3:21:00 AM
Thank you,Shadow, so much for placing me and glad you liked it :)

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