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A Killer Is Loose

circling buzzards
smelling the destroyed carnage
someone’s beloved

detectives arrive
important questions arise
telltale fingers

the prints are taken
medical examiner
a killer is loose

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 4/29/2021 4:41:00 PM
'someone's beloved' really chilled me. Smashing senryu, Caren. ~ gw
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/29/2021 8:14:00 PM
Thank you Gershon. It is true.
Date: 4/29/2021 1:45:00 PM
ooh dark and gruesome especially with the buzzards circling.. i want to know .. who done it!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/29/2021 8:14:00 PM
There are so many sadly.
Date: 4/29/2021 5:55:00 AM
Well done! From circling buzzards to a killer is loose.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/29/2021 8:14:00 PM
Thank you Kim.

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