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A Jubilant Exhilarating Autumn

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A gaggle of snow-white geese flew down south. Winter must be nearing the cold season. Fog crept down the side of the orange hill side. Red full-grown maples dotted the countryside, And from amongst the withering grass Asters still persevered in their beauty. A breeze blew across the uneven plain Shedding colourful leaves whilst squirrels Ran from tree to tree. in search all in competition, For nooks to hide their wintry fare. Clouds dispersed the fog. Birds hunted for worms. Sweet to hear the twittering Finches and robins Relishing all with their songs. Last stanza is a Tanka. 11 October 2021 Subject: Nature Let's Mix It Up Poetry Contest Last stanza: tanka Sponsored by: Constance La France

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