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A Journey With Death

It is getting dark... When the destiny talks .... We must hark... Suddenly and quick.. Putting its mark... ......... My car is fling in the air.... I`m losing my life.. Is that fair? I have children ... need my care.. The glass spreads... every where... ......... Nothing but silence... A very deep one.... Where is my soul....? Where have I gone? ....... Now, I can`t breathe.... I can`t hear.... now I`m suffering... I can`t bear.... ...... Nothing but coldness... coming from darkness.... flowing into my arteries... ........ silence...silence...silence ......... She is blinking... She is breathing.... No, she is staring.... ...... A bright light..... and fresh air... That means that .... I still here... Lot of faces ... with long hair.... I`m not bleeding!!!! Is not that rare?

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Date: 9/18/2013 9:43:00 AM
Whoa Mona! This is such a profound write! You've tackled the theme of death expertly such that the reader is able to follow the occurrences - the angst and worries come out well. Very well penned!
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