A Journey That's Heavy Or Light

In the mirror of life, how we think, speak and write
paves a journey that's heavy or light
So we must become mindful of words every day
Then our lives will be happy and flow the right way
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Evans Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 9:54 AM
Your poem beautifully captures the significance of thoughts, speech, and writing in shaping one's life's journey. Thank you for sharing this insightful and inspiring poem. Its concise yet profound message serves as a beautiful reminder to be intentional with our words, fostering a life that flows in the right direction.
Sangster - K Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 7:03 PM
Thank you so much Maya for your visit and kind words. I'm sorry i did not respond sooner. I have not been very active on PS lately as my elderly Mother is at end of life and I have not been coping too well with seeing her in rapid deciline. Most of my time is now spent visiting my Mom in the nursing home.
Kavanagh  Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 4:21 AM
Mindfulness is indeed so important in everyday life Anne, not always attainable in the madness, but certainly a great message to spread, congratulations on your placement, cheers David
Sangster - K Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 4:06 PM
Thank you David. So true. Cheers Anne :-)
M  Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 7:50 AM
Anne….I just love your positive uplighting poems… you have a great attitude! Lessons to be learnt….Enjoyed! Debx
Sangster - K Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 9:12 PM
Hi Deb, Glad you enjoyed this one too. Cheers my friend :-)
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