John Lawless Poet Monoku

A Jonquil Peeks

Stealing the sun’s moment
                                             a Jonquil peeks 
                                                                        over the greying snow

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Terry Miller March 24, 2026 at 4:32 AM Brilliant, congratulations

Laurentine G March 22, 2026 at 7:24 AM Congratulations on your placement - I looked up what a jonquil was and agreed what a little piece of sunshine they are. Congratulations on your placement :) John Lawless March 22, 2026 at 9:06 AM they always amaze me when they pot up in the snow banks edge. Thanks or stopping by

Andrea Dietrich March 20, 2026 at 4:39 PM Superb! Back with congrats

Andrea Dietrich March 15, 2026 at 1:00 AM Adorable! John Lawless March 22, 2026 at 9:05 AM AW G'WAN.....yur making the Jonquil blush

Paula Goldsmith March 8, 2026 at 10:37 AM I enjoyed reading your lovely "A Jonquil Peeks" write. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed day/week writing away............ John Lawless March 22, 2026 at 9:04 AM thanks Paula, appreciate the visit

Gershon Wolf March 7, 2026 at 9:38 PM Theft was never better expressed, John. Great ku, methinks. ~ gw John Lawless March 22, 2026 at 9:04 AM a stolen kiss of spring...thanks for peeking in....