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A Hunger Unfed

In moonlit shadows, she roams alone, A hunger unfed, a heart of stone. Her crimson gaze seeks out the night, Yearning for blood, her only delight. A vampire cursed with endless thirst, Her soul consumed, her conscience cursed. Through darkened streets, she silently prowls, Seeking prey with unearthly howls. But in her eyes, a glimmer of pain, Longing for peace, for love in vain. Her fangs may hunger for the red, But in her heart, a hunger for the dead. A tragic figure of the night, Bound by darkness, shunning the light. A hunger unfed, a soul in despair, Forever she is lost in the vampire's lair.

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Date: 4/8/2024 7:51:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this superb poem, Jeanine. I love the imagery!
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Jeanine Dejesus
Date: 4/10/2024 5:40:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/25/2024 8:37:00 AM
Dear Jeanine, A haunting portrait of longing and despair. The imagery of the vampire's relentless thirst juxtaposed with her inner turmoil is powerful. It evokes a sense of empathy for her tragic existence, trapped between primal urges and a yearning for something deeper. I loved your portrayal of darkness and inner conflict for it is both captivating and poignant. Brilliant work! - Blessings, Daniel
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Jeanine Dejesus
Date: 3/25/2024 9:11:00 PM
Wow! Thank you Daniel!

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