A Huge Surprise - Collaboration With Andrea Dietrich
Looking for your twinkling eyes,
I found instead a huge surprise -
eyes like olive pits
A fishy smile beneath those eyes,
grey grimace that you can’t disguise-
sardine on a Ritz!
(just Andrea and i playing around with that tail-
rhyme form I am first stanza; She is second.)
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