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A Huge Dragon

a huge dragon
protects its gold from dwarves - -
a pile of charred bones

For PD’s Playing with Fire contest

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/12/2013 6:27:00 AM

belated congratulations Jack xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/10/2013 4:22:00 AM

Congrats on the win, Jack

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/9/2013 5:50:00 PM

Jack, , Thanks for understanding and having patience with me. I'm sending hugs from the bottom of my heart. I am very sorry I kept all my winning poems on standby. LOL, Had a MAD headache. wink! wink! .... Congratulations.... If you have time, please enjoy my Hot & Cute blog.. Called. "Fire Sister." take care and enjoy this win -- xox.LINDA

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/28/2013 9:47:00 AM

Nice haiku Jack. Like the image you create. I have just gotten over the flu again. It seemed to be a terrible year for me with the flu. We just kept passing it around the family. I hope next year will be better for us. Thanks for asking my friend. love phyl

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/26/2013 1:34:00 PM

Enjoyed the fiery scene here Jack, could smell those singed dwarf beards...of those that escaped i mean..' not that there would be many escaping...i added that in case the nogard sdaer L O L..))

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/26/2013 10:56:00 AM

Reminds me of J.R.R. Tolkien's work. I plan to see the next installment of the Hobbit movie. Nice job! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/26/2013 6:00:00 AM

super Haiku Jack gl in contest Shadow x smile hug

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 11/25/2013 10:39:00 PM

I instantly thought of the hobbit with Richard Boone as the voice of the Dragon. Enjoyed your poem.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/25/2013 6:03:00 PM

Whoa!! Those were toasted dwarfs..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/25/2013 5:27:00 PM

Bummer, those poor innocent dwarves, just wanted some gold to raise a family(I'm sure)! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! You have brightened my day with this lovely piece, Great Work!!

A Huge Dragon

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