A Huge Dragon

a huge dragon
protects its gold from dwarves - -
a pile of charred bones

For PD’s Playing with Fire contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 6:27 AM
belated congratulations Jack xx
Mehta Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 4:22 AM
Congrats on the win, Jack
A   Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 5:50 PM
Jack, , Thanks for understanding and having patience with me. I'm sending hugs from the bottom of my heart. I am very sorry I kept all my winning poems on standby. LOL, Had a MAD headache. wink! wink! .... Congratulations.... If you have time, please enjoy my Hot & Cute blog.. Called. "Fire Sister." take care and enjoy this win -- xox.LINDA
Babcock Avatar
November 28, 2013 at 9:47 AM
Nice haiku Jack. Like the image you create. I have just gotten over the flu again. It seemed to be a terrible year for me with the flu. We just kept passing it around the family. I hope next year will be better for us. Thanks for asking my friend. love phyl
Maverick Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 1:34 PM
Enjoyed the fiery scene here Jack, could smell those singed dwarf beards...of those that escaped i mean..' not that there would be many escaping...i added that in case the nogard sdaer L O L..))
Anish Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 10:56 AM
Reminds me of J.R.R. Tolkien's work. I plan to see the next installment of the Hobbit movie. Nice job! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Hamilton Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 6:00 AM
super Haiku Jack gl in contest Shadow x smile hug
Cavanaugh Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 10:39 PM
I instantly thought of the hobbit with Richard Boone as the voice of the Dragon. Enjoyed your poem.
Kendrick Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 6:03 PM
Whoa!! Those were toasted dwarfs..Sara
Sivey Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 5:27 PM
Bummer, those poor innocent dwarves, just wanted some gold to raise a family(I'm sure)! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! You have brightened my day with this lovely piece, Great Work!!
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