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a hover of trout

a hover of trout under the arch of the bridge . . rainbow in the sky April 18, 2018 for Mick Talbot's haiku contest Theme: fish

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Date: 4/25/2018 1:36:00 AM
I think this is classic, Andrea... (it really is!) Congrats!
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Date: 4/24/2018 8:41:00 AM
Lovely haiku Andrea! Though now I'm drooling thinking of rainbow trout, yum yum! ;) Congrats on first place! xomo!
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Date: 4/24/2018 7:00:00 AM
beautiful imagery here in this Haiku and a bit of word play to boot....maybe there are fish in heaven.....Congrats on your placement Andrea
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Date: 4/23/2018 9:49:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats on your gold medal finish, Andrea.
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Date: 4/23/2018 7:53:00 PM
Beautiful haiku, Andrea! Congrats on your top win :)
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Date: 4/23/2018 4:01:00 PM
Always a pleasure to return with congratulations, Andrea....well done on placing right at the top!! Regards // paul
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Date: 4/23/2018 2:39:00 PM
To me, you are always a teacher. Such a unique imagery... Hugs, Bobby
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Date: 4/23/2018 2:05:00 PM
Why am I not surprised you ended up at the top? Gorgeous imagery.
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Date: 4/23/2018 1:52:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the haiku contest, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/23/2018 12:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Educational and beautiful.
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Date: 4/23/2018 9:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Andrea with your amazing haiku, a hover of trout brilliant, learned something new. :))
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Date: 4/23/2018 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your gold medal win Andrea. Great haiku, a hover of trout, like it, can't remember a shoal of trout being so-called, a new one for me... Mick
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Date: 4/23/2018 7:36:00 AM
Beautiful Andrea, I can vividly see this wonderful image. GL in the contest too. Warm regards, Laura.
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Date: 4/21/2018 10:59:00 AM
I love this image, Andrea, I enjoy fishing. John
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Date: 4/21/2018 8:21:00 AM
You have projected a lovely image, Andrea. Rainbow trout, especially the male, have beautiful colours. The arc and rainbow compliment one another. ~ As an aside...you'll find the book "Fishes" by Brian Wildsmith interesting. Regards // paul
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Date: 4/20/2018 11:04:00 PM
rainbow trout...no doubt. exquisite Andrea
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Date: 4/19/2018 6:57:00 AM
Perfect imagery ..one on earth the other in sky..kudos for the imagination and delivery, Andrea.
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Date: 4/19/2018 2:40:00 AM
A lovely image you've created Andrea. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 4/18/2018 11:11:00 PM
Very pretty image!
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Date: 4/18/2018 10:31:00 PM
A beautiful scene, Andrea. Well done.
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Date: 4/18/2018 9:56:00 PM
Beautiful imagery! Good luck in contest.
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Date: 4/18/2018 9:24:00 PM
Nice haiku! I plan to go fishing soon now that the weather is getting warmer. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/18/2018 9:09:00 PM
Awesome Haiku, Andrea, luck in the contest! .. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/18/2018 8:02:00 PM
Up and over...a trout rainbow...great imagery...
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Date: 4/18/2018 7:15:00 PM
well I've learned a new collective noun now thanks Andrea:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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