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A Hover of Trout

a hover of trout

under the arch of the bridge . .

rainbow in the sky


April 18, 2018 for Mick Talbot's haiku contest
Theme: fish

fishhaiku

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Moon Flower

April 25, 2018 at 1:36 AM

I think this is classic, Andrea... (it really is!) Congrats!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

April 24, 2018 at 8:41 AM

Lovely haiku Andrea! Though now I'm drooling thinking of rainbow trout, yum yum! ;) Congrats on first place! xomo!

John Lawless

April 24, 2018 at 7:00 AM

beautiful imagery here in this Haiku and a bit of word play to boot....maybe there are fish in heaven.....Congrats on your placement Andrea

Line Gauthier

April 23, 2018 at 9:49 PM

Back with well deserved congrats on your gold medal finish, Andrea.

Laura Leiser

April 23, 2018 at 7:53 PM

Beautiful haiku, Andrea! Congrats on your top win :)

Paul Callus

April 23, 2018 at 4:01 PM

Always a pleasure to return with congratulations, Andrea....well done on placing right at the top!! Regards // paul

Anindya Mohan Tagore

April 23, 2018 at 2:39 PM

To me, you are always a teacher. Such a unique imagery... Hugs, Bobby

Dale Gregory Cozart

April 23, 2018 at 2:05 PM

Why am I not surprised you ended up at the top? Gorgeous imagery.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 23, 2018 at 1:52 PM

- Congratulations on your 1st place in the haiku contest, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Gentry

April 23, 2018 at 12:25 PM

Congratulations on your win! Educational and beautiful.

Roy Pett

April 23, 2018 at 9:20 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Andrea with your amazing haiku, a hover of trout brilliant, learned something new. :))

Mick Talbot

April 23, 2018 at 8:21 AM

Congratulations on your gold medal win Andrea. Great haiku, a hover of trout, like it, can't remember a shoal of trout being so-called, a new one for me... Mick

Laura Hay

April 23, 2018 at 7:36 AM

Beautiful Andrea, I can vividly see this wonderful image. GL in the contest too. Warm regards, Laura.

John Gondolf

April 21, 2018 at 10:59 AM

I love this image, Andrea, I enjoy fishing. John

Paul Callus

April 21, 2018 at 8:21 AM

You have projected a lovely image, Andrea. Rainbow trout, especially the male, have beautiful colours. The arc and rainbow compliment one another. ~ As an aside...you'll find the book "Fishes" by Brian Wildsmith interesting. Regards // paul