A House On Fire

I loved you but the blaze was destructive 
I had to always fight through the fiery furnace of feelings 
Always grasping for something stable to find nothing
but smoke surrounding me
Sparks flying, burning, devouring my senses.

Vision clouded, throat burning I slowly sink to the floor 
And finally I sit with my pain and let it burn like a flame, 
It flickers for a while but won’t ever go out,
This agony is constant and cruel; my body and soul it claims.
They tell me time heals but still-I don’t think il ever quite be the same.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gauthier Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 6:00 AM
Great poem about the complexities of toxic relationships.
Naomz92 Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 7:30 AM
Thanks for the feedback! yes it’s about trying to make an impossible relationship work..
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