Brooke S. Poet Narrative

A Horse Story

there was a horse
he was standing on course

                                he was standing at the gate
                                thinking he was late

                                                          i asked if i could get him
                                                          so we went in and saw kim

                                           there was already a girl buying 
                                         so i started crying
         then i said ...

                              solong pony
                          i will be lonely

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John Freeman June 28, 2011 at 1:59 PM Brooke, Cool to see a great poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses

Wandering Butterfly June 24, 2011 at 5:32 AM CONGRATS BROOKE!!! VERY GOOD POEM YOU WROTE HERE, SO CREATIVE, AND NICE USE OF WORDS, LOVE YA SIS, Randa Bear

Andrea Dietrich June 23, 2011 at 8:55 PM HI, Brooke. What a cute ending so long pony I will be lonely. Congrats on your win.

Sara Kendrick June 23, 2011 at 5:28 PM Great work..Congrats...Sara

Ralph Taylor June 23, 2011 at 5:10 PM Congrats on your win, Brooke. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 23, 2011 at 2:08 PM Congrats Brooke on your excellent win in the horse contest with this exciting entry luv.. enjoy.. for great poetry ...

Carol Sunshine Brown June 23, 2011 at 12:42 PM Congratulations and thank you for supporting my contest Brooke. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta June 16, 2011 at 2:50 PM Creative and meaningful expressions, brooke