A Hopeful Loser's Complaint

Why am I a love-sick, dead-broke loser
in love with a rich and affluent girl?
A poor, unwise fool, why did I choose her?
(I can't afford such a lovely, rich Pearl!)
I wish I were a prince, handsome and rich,
youthful and full of promise and prospects
(for her): but I'm none of the above, which
makes us at best love's unlikely suspects.
Ironic that the love of my bleak life
is beyond my abject, penniless reach
and past my hope of her being my wife:
barriers that harsh Fate won't let me breach.
But God they say can move heaven and earth
for those of unlike yoke to meet His goals;
now and anon He moves those hearts of worth
which He wills and unites as entwined souls.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 8:12 PM
I really enjoyed reading this poem of yours tonight. Shows the angst of the lovelorn. I hope god smiles on you!! (if this is based on fact and not fiction) Congrats on a worthy win.
Oyewole Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 12:57 PM
Wonderful!! Congrats on the win!!!
Andresen Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 7:09 AM
- Hi Ngoc, congratulations on your fine winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Sirak Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 6:46 AM
You describe so well the anguish of reaching for the unattainable, and finish with the belief that nothing is unattainable with God. I love this one! Congrats on the win.
Kayode Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 6:16 AM
Congrats on the worthy win Ngoc
Mehta Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 5:09 AM
Lovely poem. Congratulations on the fine win, ngoc
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