A Home In the Countryside

A Home in the Countryside

Who could resist,
The country greens,
The clean air,
And the wonderful scenes?

We lived in a house,
In the middle of a field,
The green grass stood by,
The trees a shield,

The smell of freshness,
The scene of joys,
The feeling of peace,
The silent noise.

We sat on the porch,
The evening so long,
We just sat and relaxed,
Till the dinner gong.

In the night we saw,
The stars so bright,
The sky so black,
Against their twinkling light.

A scene of serenity,
All year round,
Makes the heart give,
A joyful pound.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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August 17, 2013 at 11:06 PM
CONGRATS on having your poem featured this week........ Love ~ SKAT ~
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August 17, 2013 at 10:13 PM
Ibrahim, . Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* LINDA *
Hamilton Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 5:48 AM
idyllic place to live congrats on being featured Shadow x smiles
Mckenzie Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 9:36 PM
Congrats on your wonderful featured poem! Laura
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August 11, 2013 at 12:52 PM
How lovely,great poem. I have a similar poem The Family Home. It would be nice if you could read mine xx
Gabriella Avatar
August 3, 2013 at 4:59 PM
Oh mine too! I want that, I want to live there!! Such a beautiful piece you have written here. It really causes emotion in me and makes me wistful. :) Excellent job!
Ansari Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 5:03 PM
Please check out my poetry at www.capturethewords.weebly .com Thanks a lot "FRIEND"
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August 4, 2013 at 4:56 PM
Thanks a lot.
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August 1, 2013 at 10:47 PM
it is beautiful, and sounds like a place of comfort and inspiration. Ibrahim,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"..... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT
Ansari Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 5:04 PM
Please check out my poetry at www.capturethewords.weebly .com Thanks a lot "FRIEND"
Ansari Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 4:57 PM
I sure will. Thanks
A   Avatar
August 1, 2013 at 7:00 AM
Ibrahim, -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@......
Ansari Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 5:04 PM
Please check out my poetry at www.capturethewords.weebly .com Thanks a lot "FRIEND"
Ansari Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 4:58 PM
Thanks. i also look forward to reading your poetry.
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August 1, 2013 at 3:55 AM
- Hello new member: Ibrahim. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Ansari Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 5:05 PM
Thanks for the welcome. Same to you. Please check out my poetry at www.capturethewords.weebly .com Thanks a lot "FRIEND"
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