A Hollow Promise

...a letdown that stinks worse than a rotten fish; almost sacrilegious.




Date written: 01/16/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Rodrigues Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 9:02 PM
Those things that unsettle the soul...
Ibeh Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 11:25 PM
...and the mind! Thanks for dropping by, Kim:-)
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 12:35 PM
Hello Edward Ibeh, i agree with this monoku. You have a nice day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 2:41 PM
You are so welcome my friend. have a blessed day.
Ibeh Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 3:20 PM
Thanks for your continued support, Darlene:-) Have a nice day as well!
Callus Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 9:58 AM
A false promise is like a faux fireplace, Ibeh! The flickering flames too are a let down! Regards // paul
Ibeh Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 11:32 AM
Speech! Ain't that the truth? Thanks for dropping by, Paul:-)
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