A Hollow Promise

...a letdown that stinks worse than a rotten fish; almost sacrilegious. Date written: 01/16/2020

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/16/2020 9:02:00 PM

Those things that unsettle the soul...

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/16/2020 11:25:00 PM

...and the mind! Thanks for dropping by, Kim:-)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/16/2020 12:35:00 PM

Hello Edward Ibeh, i agree with this monoku. You have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/17/2020 2:41:00 PM

You are so welcome my friend. have a blessed day.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/16/2020 3:20:00 PM

Thanks for your continued support, Darlene:-) Have a nice day as well!

Paul Callus

Date: 1/16/2020 9:58:00 AM

A false promise is like a faux fireplace, Ibeh! The flickering flames too are a let down! Regards // paul

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/16/2020 11:32:00 AM

Speech! Ain't that the truth? Thanks for dropping by, Paul:-)