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A Hippy Hymn

There are things I'd rather
burn in hell for than
admit that I have done

'Cept anxiety
is pushing me
towards honesty

That foreign land foreboding
wander it could be loading
peace and love for all eternity.

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Doris Culverhouse Date: 10/7/2011 7:07:00 PM enjoyed! Login to Reply

Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 10/7/2011 5:39:00 PM Who has time or need for Confession, Keep on rockin' in a FREE WORLD! I live much like a HippY...or so Academia scolds as I keep on truckin' and burnin! 420 Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 10/7/2011 2:37:00 PM A very "hip" poem, Nancy. I must say I love the witty comments you leave on poems. Big thanks to Felix from Oscar. Love, Crolyn Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 10/7/2011 1:58:00 PM Hmm, yeah I think that there are those times that we just want to come clean rather than worry ourselves to death over the what-ifs...arrgh don't let me get going on the what-ifs-- and cool you like purple :) & thank you for loving my voice (sorry, I am dense mode, you meant poetic voice? or literal voice as in the voicebox??) I do love the former, the latter hmmm, I love it in my own way, just not sure about other people, haha :D thank you again :D Login to Reply

Tony Lane Date: 10/7/2011 7:55:00 AM Honesty is a reflection of reality and lucky for us, we define our own reality. If that's not true, I can't write. See? Tony Login to Reply

Dan Kearley Date: 10/6/2011 11:26:00 PM Right!!! :-) Login to Reply

Wayne Sapp Date: 10/6/2011 10:35:00 PM Nice message well delivered. Good stuff, Nancy Wayne Login to Reply