Notes About The Poem

Hiku is any English language variation on the Japanese haiku

As with the Japnese haiku itself rhyme is permissable  where it is 'inevitable as part of the natural meaning and its effect is a delightful surprise' as Basho (the master haikuist)illustrates here (one of many of his rhymed traditional Japanese haiku))

The autumn moon is bright

Sea-waves whirl up to my gate

Crested silvery white

A Hiku- a Rhymed Form Is Ok In Haiku

*now my hiku with rhyme*
 
at the edge of my gaze
bathed in September sun-
a sepia rose haze


Copyright © Brian Strand | Year Posted 2007
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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April 17, 2023 at 10:54 AM
Hello Brian, sunsets are beautiful over the water even more. Emjoy yur day my friend./Darlene\
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