Kyle Kriticos Poet Rhyme

A Herd of Swine

Oh Lord, please put me in the clear
Though a man like  me shouldn't have your ear
It sounds so silly in my mind
To call upon Who I defy
That's why
I'm like a demon now
Praying only to be swine
Oh Lord, I trample out a path
And you ingest the aftermath
I kind of liked that cross of mine
Put it round my neck 
Left you behind
That's why
I'm like a demon now
Praying only to be swine

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Timothy Mcguire February 9, 2022 at 3:45 PM Well written! Great poem.

William Kelii Kekaula April 30, 2021 at 11:55 PM The title's an eye-catcher. Anticipative read and your approach to truth are compelling. Profound contemplation indeed, cheers Kyle, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich April 17, 2021 at 4:19 PM very different kind of poem. Interesting, deep, and unique!

Alexis Y. April 17, 2021 at 1:10 AM WoW! Kyle, After I reading your title, your poem is not what expected. I found it to be deep. I echo what Eve said. PS, thanks for stopping by page today. Have a great day-Alexis

Gershon Wolf April 16, 2021 at 1:28 PM Personally, when I petition the Lord, I feel as if pearls from the mouth of a big fool are being emitted. What can I say?!

Victor Buhagiar April 16, 2021 at 12:17 PM God is compassionate and love. He shed His blood for us. So now you are a lamb being carried on His shoulders.

Eve Roper April 16, 2021 at 9:30 AM Wow! A powerful write, Kyle. A plea for help. Enjoyed reading. If true my prayers are with you. Eve