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A Herd of Swine

Oh Lord, please put me in the clear Though a man like me shouldn't have your ear It sounds so silly in my mind To call upon Who I defy That's why I'm like a demon now Praying only to be swine Oh Lord, I trample out a path And you ingest the aftermath I kind of liked that cross of mine Put it round my neck Left you behind That's why I'm like a demon now Praying only to be swine

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 2/9/2022 3:45:00 PM

Well written! Great poem.

Hilo Poet

Date: 4/30/2021 11:55:00 PM

The title's an eye-catcher. Anticipative read and your approach to truth are compelling. Profound contemplation indeed, cheers Kyle, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/17/2021 4:19:00 PM

very different kind of poem. Interesting, deep, and unique!

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/17/2021 1:10:00 AM

WoW! Kyle, After I reading your title, your poem is not what expected. I found it to be deep. I echo what Eve said. PS, thanks for stopping by page today. Have a great day-Alexis

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/16/2021 1:28:00 PM

Personally, when I petition the Lord, I feel as if pearls from the mouth of a big fool are being emitted. What can I say?!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/16/2021 12:17:00 PM

God is compassionate and love. He shed His blood for us. So now you are a lamb being carried on His shoulders.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/16/2021 9:30:00 AM

Wow! A powerful write, Kyle. A plea for help. Enjoyed reading. If true my prayers are with you. Eve