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A Hell To Go Through

I wake up on a bed I don't recognize realization struck I see myself below me I look around, I see red everywhere, red Its hell I could walk around but not so far from myself. Then suddenly, everyone I know is there infront of the other me. I stand awestruck as I realize that I'm dying.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/24/2016 4:01:00 AM
- Welcome with your first poems here on PoetrySoup, James - PoetrySoup is simply the world's best :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/18/2016 7:08:00 AM
James, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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