A Hell To Go Through

I wake up
on a bed I don't recognize
realization struck
I see myself
below me

I look around, I see
red
everywhere,
red
Its hell

I could walk around
but not so far
from myself.
Then suddenly,
everyone I know is there
infront of the other me.

I stand
awestruck
as I realize
that 
I'm dying.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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February 24, 2016 at 4:01 AM
- Welcome with your first poems here on PoetrySoup, James - PoetrySoup is simply the world's best :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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February 18, 2016 at 7:08 AM
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