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A Heavenly Hint

In a golden Garden that gilters in 
graceful glamour with a gate of 
glints
stretches a stream of stars 
arround sanctuaries and spirits 
that sparkle.
A habitation of Holies with 
hoists of Helium... a heavenly hint:
a world without walls 
where worshipers whirls... 
without a  wrinkle.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/25/2012 4:13:00 PM
Hi Adeleke, please check the contest rules. The poem is to be four lines with an ABAB rhyme scheme. I hope you can edit what you have here as it's quite beautiful. Love, Carolyn
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