A Heart's Tale

The catch in your breath
  your pulsating chest

You're lightheaded, silly
  tongue babbling, willy-nilly

Eviscerated, all that
  when she crosses your path

Your heart turned to stone
  bare survival alone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Krutsinger Avatar
June 5, 2021 at 5:32 AM
I have seen this so often " You're lightheaded, silly tongue babbling, willy-nilly" - it is hilarious to me. Well penned!
Wolf Avatar
June 5, 2021 at 8:53 PM
Well, willy-nilly, we're so silly. Ain't we got fun?! Smiles, gw
Hankins Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 8:57 PM
Wow, the turn was a bit shocking, G.W. Nice couplets that tell the whole story in just a few lines. Enjoyed it.
Wolf Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 6:41 PM
Maybe I was thinking of that Hall & Oates hit from the 80's, 'Man-Eater,' about the woman who ate men alive. Grisly. :) gw
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace