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A Heartbeat Flutter

Awestruck
Light of daybreak
Monarch butterflies swarm
In a fluttering flight amid
Jade fields

2/4/2025

naturecinquain

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Jennifer Proxenos

February 8, 2025 at 1:39 AM

What a breathtaking scene that must have been. Your chosen words to describe this scene as a picture perfect. Congratulations on your win my friend. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.

Victor Buhagiar

February 7, 2025 at 2:36 AM

You do not need a picture for this poem. The imagery is enough to make us compose nature's beauty. Hugs.

Paula Goldsmith

February 6, 2025 at 11:07 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely Cinquain write. Have a blessed day with your win as you write away..................

CayCay Godwin

February 4, 2025 at 6:38 PM

Hi, there - hello - so glad to see you're still here. A joy to read you again. I wrote for this contest, but when I went to post my entry, there was no room left at the contest. So I just posted my write as a new poem. Your's is very creative and I'm sure it will do well in the contest. Read Rerouted and Scattered if you wish news about where I've been ... CayCay

Silent One

February 4, 2025 at 9:18 AM

You painted a beautiful imagery here..

Ink Empress

February 4, 2025 at 12:14 AM

So beautiful and breathtaking dear eve, i live how youv written about the jade fields, and also how youv written “ Light of daybreak Monarch butterflies swarm” lovely cinquain! A fav! Best wishes. Sending you light always

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