A Heartbeat Flutter

Awestruck Light of daybreak Monarch butterflies swarm In a fluttering flight amid Jade fields 2/4/2025

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/8/2025 1:39:00 AM

What a breathtaking scene that must have been. Your chosen words to describe this scene as a picture perfect. Congratulations on your win my friend. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/7/2025 2:36:00 AM

You do not need a picture for this poem. The imagery is enough to make us compose nature's beauty. Hugs.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/6/2025 11:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely Cinquain write. Have a blessed day with your win as you write away..................

CayCay Jennings

Date: 2/4/2025 6:38:00 PM

Hi, there - hello - so glad to see you're still here. A joy to read you again. I wrote for this contest, but when I went to post my entry, there was no room left at the contest. So I just posted my write as a new poem. Your's is very creative and I'm sure it will do well in the contest. Read Rerouted and Scattered if you wish news about where I've been ... CayCay

Silent One

Date: 2/4/2025 9:18:00 AM

You painted a beautiful imagery here..

Tom Woody

Date: 2/4/2025 6:48:00 AM

Pretty pictured you've word painted Eve

Ink Empress

Date: 2/4/2025 12:14:00 AM

So beautiful and breathtaking dear eve, i live how youv written about the jade fields, and also how youv written “ Light of daybreak Monarch butterflies swarm” lovely cinquain! A fav! Best wishes. Sending you light always