A Heartbeat

A wake from a deep sleep, A lost soul playing for keeps!

H atred fuel this dark angry heart.
E vil consumes him ripping him apart.
A rrived here beyond the stratosphere in 1978.
R ioting like a demon possessed inmate!
T eeth razer sharp like a primate!
B eneath his breast plate his heart rate slows.
E vil drains his veins and he just knows.
A t last the time has come - he's done!
T he bullet explodes from the barrel of the gun!!!


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Haick Avatar
May 1, 2010 at 6:24 PM
Wow, I feel the anger in this one, JAM...glad your able to express it here, love...Fine Acrostic....Much love, PB
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April 29, 2010 at 1:00 PM
Jimmy - wonderful acrostic I enjoyed it immensely - re Metamorphosis - can you soup mail me first as I can't soup mail out. Regards Janette
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