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A Heart That Cries

Here I lay in my Bed thinking of You with my Mind running wild, The Expression on my Face is far from mild in fact I have a big Smile. I close my Eyes to kiss you with my Heart racing more than a Mile, Wishing that I could hold You for more than a while. I pray for You to open your Eyes to realize that what You find in Me will not be found in no other Guy. I would love for You to be mine, Not just a 1 Night Valentine. Let me be your Knight to sweep You off your Feet to show you that your search for a real Man is over You've found Me. By : Shawn Muñoz

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Date: 9/25/2016 1:29:00 AM
Romantic and macho but in a nice way
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Shawn Munoz
Date: 10/3/2016 2:00:00 AM
Thank You
Date: 1/23/2015 4:13:00 PM
Very passionate and romantic poem. I like it. Thanks for visiting my poem Where have you gone, my love and for your touching comment.
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Shawn Munoz
Date: 1/23/2015 4:47:00 PM
You're very welcome and thank you for stopping by. I hope you like my other pieces on here.
Date: 12/29/2014 4:38:00 PM
Very romantic poem, Shawn. Nice flow and sincere, coming straight from your heart. Best wishes for a wonderful New Year coming your way! Sandra
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Shawn Munoz
Date: 12/29/2014 8:20:00 PM
Thank you Sandra likewise glad you enjoys.
Date: 12/29/2014 3:18:00 PM
You seem like a very romantic guy. so I hope you get your dream come true. Happy new year, shawn!!
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Shawn Munoz
Date: 12/29/2014 8:19:00 PM
Thank you sweetie, it sure did come true 5 years ago and going strong. I guess you can say that , I've always spoken from the heart with a filter free tongue lol.
Date: 3/27/2014 8:50:00 PM
Hi Shawn, Loved this poem,heartfelt xx ( please read mine......wonderful man)
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Shawn Munoz
Date: 3/28/2014 10:34:00 AM
Thank you will do hun
Date: 2/12/2014 2:35:00 AM
A true knight doesn't need shining armour. If his heart is true any damsel in distress will embrace him. Your poem tells me your heart beats true. Thanks for sharing.
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Shawn Munoz
Date: 2/24/2014 3:54:00 PM
Very true on both thank you for passing by.
Date: 1/2/2014 7:59:00 AM
Wow such an admirable poem of passion! In brilliant rhymin. I luv d mention of knights too. New yr greetings shawn.
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Shawn Munoz
Date: 1/2/2014 9:38:00 AM
Thank you very much and like wise.
Date: 12/30/2013 7:19:00 PM
Very romantic. Love this one.
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Shawn Munoz
Date: 12/30/2013 8:18:00 PM
Ty sweetie

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