A Heart That Cries

Here I lay in my Bed thinking 
of You with my Mind running wild,
The Expression on my Face is far
from mild in fact I have a big Smile.

I close my Eyes to kiss you with my
Heart racing more than a Mile,
Wishing that I could hold You for 
more than a while.

I pray for You to open your Eyes to 
realize that what You find in Me will
not be found in no other Guy.

I would love for You to be mine,
Not just a 1 Night Valentine.

Let me be your Knight to sweep 
You off your Feet to show you 
that your search for a real Man
is over You've found Me.

By : Shawn Muñoz
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Delisle Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 1:29 AM
Romantic and macho but in a nice way
Munoz Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 2:00 AM
Thank You
Yamin Avatar
January 23, 2015 at 4:13 PM
Very passionate and romantic poem. I like it. Thanks for visiting my poem Where have you gone, my love and for your touching comment.
Munoz Avatar
January 23, 2015 at 4:47 PM
You're very welcome and thank you for stopping by. I hope you like my other pieces on here.
Haight Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 4:38 PM
Very romantic poem, Shawn. Nice flow and sincere, coming straight from your heart. Best wishes for a wonderful New Year coming your way! Sandra
Munoz Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 8:20 PM
Thank you Sandra likewise glad you enjoys.
Dietrich Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 3:18 PM
You seem like a very romantic guy. so I hope you get your dream come true. Happy new year, shawn!!
Munoz Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 8:19 PM
Thank you sweetie, it sure did come true 5 years ago and going strong. I guess you can say that , I've always spoken from the heart with a filter free tongue lol.
Brewer Avatar
March 27, 2014 at 8:50 PM
Hi Shawn, Loved this poem,heartfelt xx ( please read mine......wonderful man)
Munoz Avatar
March 28, 2014 at 10:34 AM
Thank you will do hun
Watson Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 2:35 AM
A true knight doesn't need shining armour. If his heart is true any damsel in distress will embrace him. Your poem tells me your heart beats true. Thanks for sharing.
Munoz Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 3:54 PM
Very true on both thank you for passing by.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 7:59 AM
Wow such an admirable poem of passion! In brilliant rhymin. I luv d mention of knights too. New yr greetings shawn.
Munoz Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 9:38 AM
Thank you very much and like wise.
Frtiz Avatar
December 30, 2013 at 7:19 PM
Very romantic. Love this one.
Munoz Avatar
December 30, 2013 at 8:18 PM
Ty sweetie
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