I Have Forgiven You But It Will Never Be The Same Poet Rhyme

.a Heart Outlined In Steel.

A heart outlined in steel.
Designed just so i'll never feel.
It's way too late to get off this ride. 
There's no one in which I can confide.
Falling down.
The screams like thunder.
Into lost dreams and lies I plunder.

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Brittany Moon April 29, 2010 at 12:43 PM this is a very deep poem...i am amazed at your talent for poetry...i absolutely love dark poetry, and i can say that you're not only good, but also you're GREAT!!!...fav poem and fav poet...lol...God Bless and keep up the great dark creativity...~Brittany~

Brian Anderson April 16, 2009 at 6:13 AM did you read my autobiography? lol. wow. you touch a place that many are afraid to go. this is what makes poetry special.

Christopher Higgins December 16, 2008 at 7:18 AM This is a very powerful write my friend. I can feel the strength in the words.

Breana Wiggins December 15, 2008 at 10:32 AM I can relate to this one so well. I feel the same way...Great write...read some of my poems and let me know what you think... *Breana