A Heart Less Man

He told me once he loves me,
He told me that I am the only thing in this world,
He told me once he wants a family with me,
He told me once we will be married,
He promised to give me the world,
He promised me he'll always be there with me, no matter what
He promised that he'll be there for ever,
He promised me that if I am loyal and hold on on him,
He will never leave me or loose me,
Guess what all of these years?
He LIED to me,
He betray me,
He never trusted me,like he said he does
He wasn't always there for me,
When I was sad and lonely,
He walked away, never looked into my heart or eyes
He used to wiped my tears away,
But now all he does is lie and betray me,
He is forcing me to break-up with him,
He does anything he can to break my heart,
He uses me to get what he wants,
We used to be best-friends,
And now we are nothing,
He knew thats the only friend,
I got it was him who I trust and loved,
The image I had of him when I first saw him,
Its gone, the only thing I see is broken pieces of my heart,
Laying down on the crusty old floor,
I image US to grow old togather and never apart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/8/2010 12:53:00 AM
these kind of men. .don't really care, or it is that they are angry for what ever happend in their past.that they cannot get over.so they must let it out on the girl. or anyone that they may love. .or only pretend.some may not want to hurt others.but the anger they have overpowers and it makes them so ugly. you did well in this Shirin, and your name is pretty! -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 1/25/2010 6:41:00 PM
Dear Shirin, Although it's a sad situation you find yourself in, take heart. Your tomorrows will be better because you'll have one less liar to deal with! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 1/25/2010 6:41:00 AM
There are some awful heartbreakers out there, Shirin. I'm so sorry you have been going through this, but the experience inspired a powerful poem for the contest. Wishing you luck! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/25/2010 3:45:00 AM
Sad but lovely Poem nicely penned. Best wishes and love Ravindra
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