Carol Mitra Poet Rhyme

A Heart Land

Am I lost in a unknown land?
Amidst galaxies and stars so grand
I expand and kiss the sky
Grasp those lights before they fly
Touch that space, and it’s not far
The sky has filled with dazzling stars!

A golden sun shines and glows
Opens doors and always shows
An unknown land within me
Heart shaped and so grand
I grasp the light and hold it firm
The earth now chanting and so am I
Praying together as moments fly!

17.7.2021
Contest Name: Touch my heart( FIRST PLACE)
Sponsor: Regina Mclntosh

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Kim Merryman July 21, 2021 at 2:20 PM A lovely write, Carol! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M

Paula Goldsmith July 21, 2021 at 9:25 AM Congratulations on your win. A creative write. The night sky is so beautiful. Love your line, "The sky has filled with dazzling stars!" Have a blessed day...............

Beata Agustin July 21, 2021 at 4:07 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... so delightful and delighting. God bless you.

Janice Canerdy July 20, 2021 at 9:18 AM Carol, a big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Janice Carol Mitra July 20, 2021 at 6:29 PM Thank you Janice....much appreciated :)

Rama Balasubramanian July 20, 2021 at 6:23 AM Beautiful! Congratulations Carol Mitra July 20, 2021 at 6:25 AM Thanks dear Rama :)

Christuraj Alex July 20, 2021 at 6:13 AM I grasp the light and hold it firm Spiritual intimacy. Congratulations! Carol Mitra July 20, 2021 at 6:20 AM Thanks dear Christuraj....much love :)

Regina Mcintosh July 20, 2021 at 3:53 AM I love this. Congrats on a top win. God bless you always. Love, Gina Carol Mitra July 20, 2021 at 6:19 AM Thanks dear Gina....God Bless you too...much love :)