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A Heart Called Eddie

The poet of love Do not stare into his eyes Brown hypnotizing

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/1/2010 4:03:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your Senryu today, Edward! If you'd like read more of my poems...Thank you for your comment and have a nice weekend...Gert

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/30/2010 10:31:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Edward. I wish you a weekend full of love and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol

Skat A

Date: 4/30/2010 9:44:00 AM

I love your heart already EDDIE,, IRMA

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/29/2010 10:29:00 PM

Welcome back, "Eddie." Mesmerizing senryu! Would love to see a photo featuring your "brown hypnotizing" eyes. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/29/2010 8:52:00 PM

I enjoyed the poem. Nice senryu

Allie Lusha

Date: 4/29/2010 2:07:00 PM

Now I'm curios to see your hypnotising eyes, thats me tell me not to look and I will lol...cool write Eddie and thanks for your kind comments on my poems....Allie

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/29/2010 1:43:00 PM

Have not heard from u in a long time, thanks for the comments and I enjoyed this senryu. did you see my blue spruce eyes poem. kinda the same idea with this poem.

Katherine Stella

Date: 4/29/2010 12:19:00 PM

Oh how I got hooked with someone with those baby browns but sure saw red and glad I walked away cause nothing but trouble loved this one and imagery had me smiling thanks for sharing and for your kind comments today keep up the great writing

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/29/2010 10:02:00 AM

beautiful poem,hypnotizing. . :) Charma.