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A Heart Called Eddie

The poet of love
Do not stare into his eyes
Brown hypnotizing

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Gert W. Knop

May 1, 2010 at 4:03 AM

Enjoyed reading your Senryu today, Edward! If you'd like read more of my poems...Thank you for your comment and have a nice weekend...Gert

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 30, 2010 at 10:31 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Edward. I wish you a weekend full of love and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol

Skat A

April 30, 2010 at 9:44 AM

I love your heart already EDDIE,, IRMA

Carolyn Devonshire

April 29, 2010 at 10:29 PM

Welcome back, "Eddie." Mesmerizing senryu! Would love to see a photo featuring your "brown hypnotizing" eyes. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 29, 2010 at 8:52 PM

I enjoyed the poem. Nice senryu

Allie Lusha

April 29, 2010 at 2:07 PM

Now I'm curios to see your hypnotising eyes, thats me tell me not to look and I will lol...cool write Eddie and thanks for your kind comments on my poems....Allie

Doris Culverhouse

April 29, 2010 at 1:43 PM

Have not heard from u in a long time, thanks for the comments and I enjoyed this senryu. did you see my blue spruce eyes poem. kinda the same idea with this poem.

Katherine Stella

April 29, 2010 at 12:19 PM

Oh how I got hooked with someone with those baby browns but sure saw red and glad I walked away cause nothing but trouble loved this one and imagery had me smiling thanks for sharing and for your kind comments today keep up the great writing