A Heart As Black As Coal

When skin was smooth and wrinkles few
                         the doors all opened up for you
And though your heart was black as coal
                   It mattered not, to reach your goal

Yet hearts that shine with beauty’s glow
        are worth much more than you could know
And now that silver knows your name
                        you only have yourself to blame

With spots of age and tattered brows
                    and skin that bloats of fatted cows
What good now, a mirrored gaze
                          left behind, your younger days

But kindness says, it’s not too late
                       a heart can grow beyond its fate
So lift your love and clear your head
                    and from within you’ll glow instead
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Canerdy Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 7:27 AM
Mike, this is a GREAT poem--skillfully written, expressive, and reassuring--that people CAN change. Janice
Gentile Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 9:20 AM
Thanks so much Janice xxoo
Wolf Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 3:45 PM
This is so encouraging, Mike. Even Cruella DeVille can have a change of heart! Beautifully written as well. Change We Can Believe In! ~ gw
Gentile Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 4:48 AM
Yes, there's hope for everyone!!! Happy Friday GW!!!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 11:51 AM
Your "A Heart As Black As Coal" is a creative write. It all starts in ones heart. Good or Bad. One can change but the question is, will they??? Have a blessed day and New Year.......................
Gentile Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 2:38 PM
Thanks Paula and Happy New Year!!!
M  Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 5:56 AM
Mike I absolutely love this poem….it is written beautifully.! So very true. Debx
Gentile Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 2:37 PM
Thanks so much Deb xxoo
Messina Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 6:01 PM
This is great, Mike. The rhythm and flow...spectacular!
Gentile Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 5:28 AM
Thanks so much Charlie!!!
Cunningham Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 10:34 AM
External beauty counts for nothing if your heart is black, the real beauty is within, and you're right Mike, it's never to late to change. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Gentile Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 5:28 AM
Thanks Tom and I hope the same for you !!!
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