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A Heart As Black As Coal

When skin was smooth and wrinkles few the doors all opened up for you And though your heart was black as coal It mattered not, to reach your goal Yet hearts that shine with beauty’s glow are worth much more than you could know And now that silver knows your name you only have yourself to blame With spots of age and tattered brows and skin that bloats of fatted cows What good now, a mirrored gaze left behind, your younger days But kindness says, it’s not too late a heart can grow beyond its fate So lift your love and clear your head and from within you’ll glow instead

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Date: 1/7/2022 7:27:00 AM
Mike, this is a GREAT poem--skillfully written, expressive, and reassuring--that people CAN change. Janice
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/7/2022 9:20:00 AM
Thanks so much Janice xxoo
Date: 1/6/2022 3:45:00 PM
This is so encouraging, Mike. Even Cruella DeVille can have a change of heart! Beautifully written as well. Change We Can Believe In! ~ gw
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/7/2022 4:48:00 AM
Yes, there's hope for everyone!!! Happy Friday GW!!!
Date: 1/6/2022 11:51:00 AM
Your "A Heart As Black As Coal" is a creative write. It all starts in ones heart. Good or Bad. One can change but the question is, will they??? Have a blessed day and New Year.......................
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/6/2022 2:38:00 PM
Thanks Paula and Happy New Year!!!
Date: 1/6/2022 5:56:00 AM
Mike I absolutely love this poem….it is written beautifully.! So very true. Debx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/6/2022 2:37:00 PM
Thanks so much Deb xxoo
Date: 1/5/2022 6:01:00 PM
This is great, Mike. The rhythm and flow...spectacular!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/6/2022 5:28:00 AM
Thanks so much Charlie!!!
Date: 1/5/2022 10:34:00 AM
External beauty counts for nothing if your heart is black, the real beauty is within, and you're right Mike, it's never to late to change. Hope your week is going well. Tom
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/6/2022 5:28:00 AM
Thanks Tom and I hope the same for you !!!

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