A Haunted House Is Taboo

Four young boys had a Halloween plot to weave to disprove the gossip they refused to believe, rumors about an abandoned haunted house where a psychotic man murdered his spouse. They shivered in the dark upon their arrival, all having second thoughts about their survival. Upon each child's face, an apprehensive frown then appeared a lady, blood stains on her gown. Vampire bats swarmed, trapping them inside tangled up in cobwebs except for one who cried, "Quick! Run for your lives. The rumors are true. I'm locked in a Zombie's jaws! This place is taboo!" They heard growling voices, then the lady's scream! Was this a nightmare, all having the same dream? From fear they'd fainted, bodies found at daybreak. Four foolish children, dead; their hearts on a stake. October 9, 2021 Something Spooky 8 to 15 Lines Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin
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Kauffman Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 10:14 AM
Creepy and truly scary Jenna! Congrats and high fives on your win! Sent chills up and down my spine and made my heart beat a little faster!
Alex Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 12:12 AM
An in-depth story. Very poetic! Congratulations!
Leiser Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 4:17 PM
Wow, such an intense, scary tale, indeed! Well done, Jenna! Congrats on your top win!
Logan Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 5:46 PM
Thanks so much, Laura.
Kitchin Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 2:05 PM
Jenna, congratulations on your first place win, loved your hauntingly spooky and scary tale!
Logan Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 5:46 PM
Thank you for honoring my poem, Tania. I’m happy it was on your winning list.
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 12:02 PM
wow what a spooky tale Jenna, sorry I missed commenting before, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Logan Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 5:44 PM
Thanks a lot, Jan.
Flood Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 11:12 AM
Yikes! If Hollywood get hold of this they’ll need to make it an XXX. Congrats on your worthy and creepy win. Terry
Logan Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 5:44 PM
Lol thanks, Terry.
Miller Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 6:32 AM
Very spooky and scary, congratulations.
Logan Avatar
October 24, 2021 at 5:43 PM
Thank you, Terry.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 10:37 PM
Brrr....that was dark and pleasurable at the same time. I love dark poems. Best for a win.
Logan Avatar
October 10, 2021 at 6:10 AM
I appreciate your remarks, Victor. Thank you.
Edmonds  Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 9:09 PM
Wow! This is truly spooky Jenna, I love it… Belle
Logan Avatar
October 10, 2021 at 6:10 AM
Thank you so much for thinking it is, Belle.
Hankins Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 8:07 PM
Oh my, Jenna, this made chills go up my spine! Truly spooky...but exceptionally well-written, well-told. Worthy of a read on Halloween night...but then some kids wouldn't sleep a wink that night!!!
Logan Avatar
October 10, 2021 at 6:09 AM
I wasn't sure where this was headed but it kinda took its own initiative once it arrived at that haunted house. Thanks for your thoughts, Milt.
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