A Haunted House Is Taboo

Four young boys had a Halloween plot to weave to disprove the gossip they refused to believe, rumors about an abandoned haunted house where a psychotic man murdered his spouse. They shivered in the dark upon their arrival, all having second thoughts about their survival. Upon each child's face, an apprehensive frown then appeared a lady, blood stains on her gown. Vampire bats swarmed, trapping them inside tangled up in cobwebs except for one who cried, "Quick! Run for your lives. The rumors are true. I'm locked in a Zombie's jaws! This place is taboo!" They heard growling voices, then the lady's scream! Was this a nightmare, all having the same dream? From fear they'd fainted, bodies found at daybreak. Four foolish children, dead; their hearts on a stake. October 9, 2021 Something Spooky 8 to 15 Lines Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin

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Date: 10/25/2021 10:14:00 AM
Creepy and truly scary Jenna! Congrats and high fives on your win! Sent chills up and down my spine and made my heart beat a little faster!
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Date: 10/25/2021 12:12:00 AM
An in-depth story. Very poetic! Congratulations!
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Date: 10/24/2021 4:17:00 PM
Wow, such an intense, scary tale, indeed! Well done, Jenna! Congrats on your top win!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/24/2021 5:46:00 PM
Thanks so much, Laura.
Date: 10/24/2021 2:05:00 PM
Jenna, congratulations on your first place win, loved your hauntingly spooky and scary tale!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/24/2021 5:46:00 PM
Thank you for honoring my poem, Tania. I’m happy it was on your winning list.
Date: 10/24/2021 12:02:00 PM
wow what a spooky tale Jenna, sorry I missed commenting before, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/24/2021 5:44:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Jan.
Date: 10/24/2021 11:12:00 AM
Yikes! If Hollywood get hold of this they’ll need to make it an XXX. Congrats on your worthy and creepy win. Terry
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/24/2021 5:44:00 PM
Lol thanks, Terry.
Date: 10/24/2021 6:32:00 AM
Very spooky and scary, congratulations.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/24/2021 5:43:00 PM
Thank you, Terry.
Date: 10/9/2021 10:37:00 PM
Brrr....that was dark and pleasurable at the same time. I love dark poems. Best for a win.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/10/2021 6:10:00 AM
I appreciate your remarks, Victor. Thank you.
Date: 10/9/2021 9:09:00 PM
Wow! This is truly spooky Jenna, I love it… Belle
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/10/2021 6:10:00 AM
Thank you so much for thinking it is, Belle.
Date: 10/9/2021 8:07:00 PM
Oh my, Jenna, this made chills go up my spine! Truly spooky...but exceptionally well-written, well-told. Worthy of a read on Halloween night...but then some kids wouldn't sleep a wink that night!!!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/10/2021 6:09:00 AM
I wasn't sure where this was headed but it kinda took its own initiative once it arrived at that haunted house. Thanks for your thoughts, Milt.
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