A Hand To Hold

Someone out there is in need of a hand to hold, a kind word, perhaps a blanket against the cold: it might even be you. We live in a world of indifference and greed, and though we hear cries of anguish, no one pays heed: you know that to be true. We believe we are sentient beings with a soul, and that our spiritual conscience makes us whole: at least, it's supposed to. I've been taught the right words to glorify God's love: but reality belies, heaven lies above; nothing's changed: nothing's new. When I end my stay on this plane of existence I will die frustrated, with little resistance: and bid this life adieu.
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Radhakrishna Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 1:36 PM
This is a great poem Emile!! Such a good example for the contest.
Pinet Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 3:25 PM
Thanks Krish, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Agustin Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 12:33 AM
Thanks for sharing this..... The message as well as the form excellently exemplifies what your contest requires. Thanks likewise for sponsoring contests that continue to harness "poetic prowess." God bless you.
Pinet Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 6:08 AM
Thanks Beata, I always look forward to reading your comments my friend, Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 1:22 PM
I really like this, Emile, and I like how you made the tails all rhyme! I see you chose three-line stanzas but I think the rules refer to a fourth line. We don't need a fourth line per stanza if we do couplets like this per stanza, right? I will go see your other example now!
Pinet Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 2:28 PM
Hi Andrea, you may use couplets or triplets the choice is left open to the poet, stay safe my friend, Emile.
Tor Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 1:39 PM
Heartfelt piece Emile. Tail-Rhyme info appreciated. Thanks for sharing my friend...
Pinet Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 4:48 PM
Thanks Michael, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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