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Tail-Rhyme

A Tail-Rhyme (also known as a tailed-rhyme) is a type of poem that has a very specific structure. In short, the piece begins with either a couplet or a triplet of lines that consist of rhymed lines. This set of either a couplet or triplet is then followed by a "tail", which is a line that does not rhyme with the couplet or triplet that preceded it. This tail line tends to be shorter in length than those lines within the couplet or triplet. This type of poetry can also be used with stanza, known as a tail-rhyme stanza, but in these pieces, all of the tail lines rhyme with each other.

 

Someone out there is searching for a hand to hold, a kind word, perhaps a blanket against the cold, it might even be you. We live in a world of indifference and greed and though we hear cries of anguish, no one pays heed, you know that to be true. We believe we're sentient beings with a soul and that our spiritual conscience makes us whole, at least it's supposed to. I know all the right words that glorify God's love but reality belies heaven lies above, nothing's changed, nothing's new. When I end my stay on this plane of existence I will die knowingly, with little resistance, and bid this life adieu. (Tail-Rhyme Stanza) 07/27/2020

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Date: 8/22/2020 1:36:00 PM
This is a great poem Emile!! Such a good example for the contest.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/22/2020 3:25:00 PM
Thanks Krish, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/8/2020 12:33:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this..... The message as well as the form excellently exemplifies what your contest requires. Thanks likewise for sponsoring contests that continue to harness "poetic prowess." God bless you.
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Date: 8/8/2020 6:08:00 AM
Thanks Beata, I always look forward to reading your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/29/2020 1:22:00 PM
I really like this, Emile, and I like how you made the tails all rhyme! I see you chose three-line stanzas but I think the rules refer to a fourth line. We don't need a fourth line per stanza if we do couplets like this per stanza, right? I will go see your other example now!
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Date: 7/29/2020 2:28:00 PM
Hi Andrea, you may use couplets or triplets the choice is left open to the poet, stay safe my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/27/2020 1:39:00 PM
Heartfelt piece Emile. Tail-Rhyme info appreciated. Thanks for sharing my friend...
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Date: 7/27/2020 4:48:00 PM
Thanks Michael, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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