I have just removed the word 'and' from the second line of the above write I think it works a little
better..' Joe..
The damp night had brought a pearly dawn Lush green grass stood ankle deep late morn And there glistening sleek stood a brand new Rolls In chocolate brown metallic, over seamless gold. A group of people are looking on, It must have cost a good deal said one, come on! It cost ten thousand the young man said There were intakes of breath, and the shaking of heads. I am just back from the states another man said Over there that’s $25,000, the conversation went dead. The year is now 2010; $10,000 would not buy a Mercedes-Benz Or even a small Ford (with extra on loan) or it might pay you 8 months rent, it’ll depend on your “zone”. © Joe Maverick 29-09-2010
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