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A Hall Mate

Three hundred eleven across or over Activity a coming_going before Her surgery and after does she need more Seeing nurses techs doctors in there flying Several times when all this commotion wonder if dying Then she slowly would emerge from her door With physicial therapy taking her over Not once in the whole ordeal did see crying (woman across the hall when husband was in the hospital..Her husband was looking after her so he called nurses to wait on her so he would not have to do it. She was at physical therapy yesterday..)

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Date: 12/29/2010 1:54:00 PM
Such a good read Sara but sad somtimes actions from others may need to fill their hearts with love,joy and poetry.I want to thank you so much for your kind and caring comment.Have a wonderful and Happy New Year.Teresa
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Date: 12/28/2010 5:52:00 PM
your suppose to write about observances. you never know what they may become. tnk
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Date: 12/28/2010 2:42:00 PM
Interesting for you to do this, just write about what is going on around you at the hospital. That is what I did with my Yuletide rEcovery poem, the year I was in the hospital. Cute title Hall Mate! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/28/2010 1:59:00 PM
Wonderful write Sara...I promise to catch up on your work this week, been busy working through our NY blizzard... lots of OT lol love Michael
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Date: 12/28/2010 1:57:00 PM
I see not only empathy but identification, my friend ... each words is deep with compassion. Happy new year!
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Date: 12/28/2010 12:50:00 PM
stange poem...may not understand if have not heard the story. love ya mom.
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Date: 12/28/2010 7:51:00 AM
Very inspiring write on the love that demands nothing from one, Sara
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Date: 12/28/2010 7:22:00 AM
of supreme love that knows no bound, sara... brilliantly expressed! huggs, nette
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Date: 12/28/2010 7:00:00 AM
Hi Sara. Sad things trigger such emotion. You captured here so strongly. Yes we just buried Dan. I sang in the church and at the graveside. so feeling a little down. Will talk later. Eamon
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Date: 12/28/2010 6:28:00 AM
Selfless love....I see it in the long-married....rare these days....good work! Sara!...jimbo
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