A Haiku

On my neck I feel
heat from ninety-three million
miles away-- WONDER!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gauthier Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 5:09 PM
Truly mindblowing. You captured to moment beautifully, LJ
Ligon Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 7:38 PM
That is indeed something for deep pondering. Good job!
Carber Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 8:44 AM
Thank you-- it's so easy to take so much for granted in the universe.
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 9:01 PM
vEry Clever!!! in this haiku form. congrats on the winners' list.
A  Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 11:19 PM
len. Congratulations, on what you thought the Answer should be in less than 8 lines.... Always ~SKAT
Allison Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 12:48 PM
it is amazing isn't it - lovely haiku:-) hugs Jan xx
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