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On my neck I feel heat from ninety-three million miles away-- WONDER!

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Date: 10/11/2018 5:09:00 PM
Truly mindblowing. You captured to moment beautifully, LJ
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Date: 4/26/2018 7:38:00 PM
That is indeed something for deep pondering. Good job!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 4/27/2018 8:44:00 AM
Thank you-- it's so easy to take so much for granted in the universe.
Date: 8/31/2015 10:48:00 PM
Len.. Loved your creative touches in this stunning write, the sensual hints in your amazing "Sun" winner were incredible!
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Date: 8/19/2015 9:01:00 PM
vEry Clever!!! in this haiku form. congrats on the winners' list.
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Date: 8/17/2015 11:19:00 PM
len. Congratulations, on what you thought the Answer should be in less than 8 lines.... Always ~SKAT
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Date: 8/3/2015 12:48:00 PM
it is amazing isn't it - lovely haiku:-) hugs Jan xx
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