A Guy Named Adam

He is so nice to me
But I still don't know why
I love him to      
So why does it make me cry
Does he know how I feel
Or does he just play it off?

What if I were to touch you
Would you walk away?
Or would that make you want to stay
I love how you're so kind to me
You've never hurt my feeings

So you would never run away
I would be to sure bout that
For yet there's more to come
I love you for who you are
Nothing more could ever change that
I love you Adam
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Ginn Avatar
December 1, 2008 at 5:29 PM
A bad age for what? Whats a good age? Is it the age you are when you realise its not all about you and about what you do for others?
Ginn Avatar
December 1, 2008 at 5:26 PM
Alexz I can tell you have been hurt in your life,,,geez most of us have. No one makes it to the end without scars. I hope your scars turn into memories of pride when you rememer how strong you were to survive. Honey you humble me that you would like to write a poem about me. Thank you very much Id be proud. Besides kid you write darn well,,,love Laurie
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December 1, 2008 at 4:22 PM
i try to be as honest as posible. i tried the insulting thing and they won't let me get away with it. so when i comment i try to comment on the best people that way i don't have to be so mean to the non poets. people who couldn't make up a nursery rhyme or to say the least an ideal that might have some feeling. why do i read your stuff? because your a growing girl and i would like to see how you develope. because some of what you do has potential. but your at a very bad age and you need guidence
Payne Avatar
December 1, 2008 at 11:58 AM
Great write, I liked this :) and no I'm not upset ~Michaela~
ahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!! we have the same b-day!!!!!
Higgins Avatar
December 1, 2008 at 5:42 AM
Love this beautiful write of love and devotion. well done.
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