A Grouping of Haiku

tulip tree leaves of lime gold tinged with brown.. touched by cold 'oar's frost nude pear tree golden fruit lays 'pon ground wasted.. two mockingbirds fight mockingbirds seek bugs hidden amongst fruit 'pon ground... yellow jacket stiff
Views from the porch.. A very short visit
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November 22, 2012 at 5:35 PM
Sara, love your haiku,,,, what a view...pd
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2012 at 8:39 AM
I sure enjoy the views of yours from that porch!
Gasun Avatar
November 22, 2012 at 8:06 AM
Excellent chain of haiku which again I enjoy reading tonight my dear friend Sara. I love the beautiful image painted by every word in your poem. Two thumbs up here. Thank you so much for sharing and for your wonderful comments on my latest poem. love always, Leonora
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November 22, 2012 at 7:21 AM
I love these Sara, quite the exemplary work here my friend! My favorite line of your poem has to be in the third Haiku, "yellow jacket stiff", that line is awesome! You have masterfully crafted another set of Haiku! What a delightful poem this one is, I really did enjoy reading it this morning! Great Work!!
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