A Grey Day Brightens

The day is grey, no sun peeks through
But then again I heard from you
A comment here a comment there
In fact comments almost everywhere

The sun is shining in my heart
The greyness of the days depart
You lighten up my cheerless day
Can’t wait to see what’s new today

© ~GG~24/10 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horsman Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 3:17 PM
and comments deserved, for these wonderful poems....
Bauer Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 10:19 AM
i think we can all relate to this one. perfect rhyme and rhythm, too!
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