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Another out on the porch for a few minutes before the work of the day..Sara

A Great Morn's Show

As morn's sun cracks the horizon
Casting pink Easter dress
Redbud stands with newly acquired
Full green hair, I am blessed

The fireball sun floats on pink clouds
Like China doll surrounded
By full dress and stiff crinoline
God's beauty compounded

As the roosters steadily crow
Song birds sing very close
A new song I have just heard
Turkeys' gooble like ghost

The sun has changed from red to orange
Now it has become gold
God has choregraphed
For all a great morn's show
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 12:43 PM
I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Sara. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 4:46 PM
this poet has produced a great morning show...well done here
Carrillo Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 4:13 PM
This is beautiful to read. I do believe that God does put on a beautiful Morning show for us. thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Rhinem Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 12:45 PM
Smile ˜ I Love The Thoughts That This Precious Poe Brings About, My Dear Beautiful Sara * Makes One Consider & Reflect Upon The Beauty To Be Held Amid Nature & Creation * We Live In A Time Which Seems To Cast Countless Lives Into A Thousand Mile An Hour Moment; Left Spiritually Dazed As Reaching To Find The Light Switch Unto Their Hearts & Souls * Thus, Yessss, Stepping From The Vertigo Ride To Commune With, "The Father of Love" * Not Even The Entire Universe Itself Could Offer A Great Gift & Or Treasure ˜ My Love, Forevermore; John!:) ˜
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May 2, 2012 at 12:47 PM
...."Tis Suppose To Read, 'Could Offer As Great A Gift & Or Treasure.'" *
Horsman Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 10:10 AM
you sure love the countryside Sara, and nature in general, it's such an honour to read your wonderful work. harry
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May 2, 2012 at 6:49 AM
A warm feeling here..love the mornings and you penned it well.!! Beautifully written.
Dey Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 1:17 AM
Very nice dear poetess.
Maverick Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 5:02 PM
Real good imagery here Sara, love the flow of its lines..
Horne Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 1:43 PM
i could see and hear this beautiful morning you described so well, my friend
Williams Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 9:28 AM
Sara great use of imagery here, lots of colour well done..David
Devnath  Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 8:27 AM
Nice poem about the Sun and its changes in the blessed Nature. Loved much, always bl
Poet Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 8:25 AM
a refreshing poem here by you Sara.Wonderful imagery.Enjoyed very much.
Burch Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 7:56 AM
What a beautiful day!! Well Done Sara!! big hugs, love ya~deb
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