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A Great Love

A GREAT LOVE A great love, like a camera lens, finds the perfect scene, depends on the lighting, frames her face, zooms in and out through time and space. A great love, chisels to know, to find the jewel hidden inside, precious and fragile. The tool taps gently, with precision, with wholesome care to find in the sorrow and imperfect, the fair. A great love, highlighted by a crown of stars. Godspeed’s illuminating moon, erases her scars. The array of her rainbow tapestry, in bloom - his eyes, arms, and heart always have room. A great love, doesn’t wait to show her affection. He sees what she hides, before her introspection. The perfect gift of honeysuckle rose or a kiss. She in turn is free to lavish him with lifetime bliss. 10/17/2017

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Date: 11/13/2017 9:28:00 PM
I like this poem Kim, "he sees what she hides"... beautiful
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2017 10:13:00 PM
Thank you Lewis!
Date: 10/19/2017 8:53:00 PM
What lovely imagery to portray great love, Kim. So very nice!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2017 8:58:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea!
Date: 10/18/2017 8:44:00 AM
A Great Love poem Kim :) enjoyed xomo!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/18/2017 1:02:00 PM
Thanks, Maureen!
Date: 10/18/2017 6:18:00 AM
A lovely poem Kim :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/18/2017 6:59:00 AM
Thanks, Gary!

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